下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today is my father’s birthday. To celebrate his birthday, I went to a shop and choose a present for him. After that, I went home by the train. On the way, I was imagining how happily my father would be when he accepted the present. The train got to the next stop before I knew it. An old lady got the train. Every seat was taken, but she had to stand with two heavy bags in both of her hand.
After an immediate hesitation（犹豫）, I gave my seat to her and he was grateful for all what I did.
In my opinion, give others a hand whenever they are in trouble not only brings happiness to the ones who receive it but also to the ones who give it.
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误,请找出,并按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
When people are asked about precious things,they usually think of money or jewelry.I am not very rich,and I have
something very preciously in my room.It’s not a CD player or
a cell phone.It’s the view outside my window.I’m lucky live
near a park.My window faces with the tops of the trees in the
park,below the trees I can see child on the playground,
young couples walked quietly,mothers playing with children,
and old people sitting on the benches.The whole world seem to
be before their eyes.My classmates like to surf the Internet or
listen to music,but when I have a free time,I just sit in my
room and enjoyed the most precious thing alone: the view.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线（），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
A shopkeeper once found that a bag money＿＿＿＿
had been stolen from his shop． He went to the＿＿＿＿
judge（法官） and tell him about his loss（损失）．＿＿＿＿
The judge ordered all people of the shop＿
to come before him． He took a number of the＿＿＿＿
sticks of equal length（长度） or gave one stick＿＿＿＿＿＿
to each person． Then he said， “Come after me＿＿＿＿＿＿
again tomorrow． I’ll then know which of you are＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
the thief because the stick given to a thief＿＿＿
will be one inch longer than the other．”＿＿＿
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Jerry,
I’m glad to know that you had an interest in Chinese ___________
food. Here I’d like to tell you something about them. Chinese ___________
food is famous with its wide variety. The food in one area ___________
can be easy told from that in another. For example, Shanghai ____________
food, a little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food that is rather ____________
hot. However, every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying, ____________
because each has a delicious taste and good for health. Since ___________
the restaurant in China usually serves special dish of different ____________
areas, you can enjoy various Chinese foods whenever you ___________
are. I’m looking forward to meet you here so that I can tell ___________
you more about Chinese food at table.
Best wishes.
Jin
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would _______
describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, _______
it seems always difficult for me to do things well as _______
them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as _______
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. _______
Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they _______
don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other _______
very well in class, but after class we become stranger at _______
once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t _______
seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? _______
Yours,
Xiao Wei