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Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poor-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere at class. I decided to make best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I have difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated
My experience tells me that it is not that you are given but how you make use of it that is determines who you are.
This year summer vacation was most enjoyable. I spent fifteen days 1.
helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside,there I 2.
saw mountains and fields cover with green plants. Sometimes I went 3.
swimming in the river to the west of the village, the water which was quite 4.
clear. I kept a diary every day. Besides do farm work，I helped the children 5.
in the neighborhood on their lessons. All of them showed much interest 6.
in English. They could read and write well，and they could hardly 7.
understand simple English. So every day in the morning Ispenttwo 8.
hours helping them improve their listening and speaking English.They all 9.
made great progresses. Their parents thought highly of me. 10.
we had a P. E. lesson in this afternoon. Our teacher taught us 1.
to practise the long jump. When the bell rings，we gathered 2.
on the playground. After warming-up exercises，the teacher 3.
told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do. Then 4.
we followed the teacher and practiced one or another. Soon 5.
came my turn，but I felt a bit of nervous. Though I failed 6.
the first time,but Ididn't lose my heart. I kept on practising. 7.
At last I was able to jump over more than 3 meters.From this 8.
lesson ,I came to see that one will succee if he has perseverance. 9.
And I decide I will do as many as I can to do every thing in future. 10.
Lily is one of the puipls who is studying in Dongshan 1.
Primary School. One day，in her way to school，Lily found 2.
a wallet lay on the road. She picked it up and found a lot of 3.
money and a calling card in them. She thought the loser must 4.
be worried. Without the wallet，she went to a public telephone 5.
and called on the owner. Then she waited at the bus-stop. The owner 6.
came by taxi in a moment. Lily gave the wallet to her. The owner 7.
was very thankful that she took out a 100-yuan note to rewardLily. 8.
And she refused it and went to school. Seeing this , the ownerraised 9.
her thumb and praised Lily helping her in time again and again . 10.
I sing when I feel good. When I sing my most favorite songs, 1.
I feel even better. Sometimes when I am listening to music 2.
and to the song words, I feel that it is specially written for me. 3.
A good song always makes me feeling something. They 4.
help me get through with the day. I also like reading. I used 5.
to avoiding poetry until an e-pal told me that I should recite 6.
poems and not to look up the meaning of the words. 7.
At the beginning I felt quite strange. Now I always lock the 8.
door. Read aloud gives you a good feeling when you are sad. 9.
When a poem is finished , I close the book and my sad is gone. 10.
Dear Nick,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August 8. And 1.
I think you made a wise choice to travel here. Sichuan provinceis2.
rich in attractions and enjoys many famous places of interests.3.
Jiu Zhaigou is well known for it’s beautiful lakes, of which 4.
the water is clear but looks colorful. It can excite visitors’ 5.
imagination .Another attraction is Dujiangyan which was built 6.
2000 years ago and was still playing an important in irragation 7.
today. Besides, the nice weather a can make your trip much 8.
enjoyable. I am sure that you have a good time. 9.
I am looking forward to your come.10.