假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In recently years many young people prefer to go shopping on the Internet. People have different opinion about online shopping. Some think online shopping was more convenient and the goods are cheap. However, other believe it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. And it is possible to check the quality of the goods.
As far as I am concern, going shopping in a store is a better way. It is a fun to walk around stores and looking at various goods on sale. We can choose what we really need and even find a good bargain. However, we can chat with the shop assistant and acquire a lot of useful information.
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）如有错误（每行最多只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Considering how much time every day a student spends
read books, newspapers, letters and notices, you’ll know 76．
what a important learning skill reading is. One can get 77．
succeed and enjoyment throughout his life. Eighty-five 78．
per cent of university work, for example, need reading. 79．
Reading is the understand of words and the connection 80．
between them, so never read some related words separate. Before 81．
reading, it is necessary to decide what you read is worth 82．
reading or not. While reading, it’s necessary to decide what is worth 83．
taking notice of. Try to grasp the main idea of what you are reading it. 84．
A good student will always try to find out his weakness so as improve 85．
his reading habits and his reading skills.
第二卷(35分)
第四部分写作
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如没有错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个“√”，如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
One day Mrs. Smith went shopping. Since she came back 76.
home, she said to her husband, “I saw beautiful dress in77.
a shop this morning. It costs fifty pounds.” “Fifty pounds to 78.
a cotton dress? That is very much!” But every evening Mrs. 79.
Smith spoke only the dress, and at last, after a week, 80.
her husband said, “Oh, buy the dress!” She was very happy. 81.
But the next day evening, when Mr. Smith returned home and 82.
asking, “Have you got the dress?”, she said, “No.” “Why not?” 83.
he said. “Well, it is still in the window of the shop in a84.
week. I think, nobody else want this dress, so I don’t 85.
want it either!”
第二卷（共30分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每一行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正。该行多一个词；把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（\）划掉。该行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词；在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没错的不要改。
Between Virginia and Maryland on the Potomac River lie 76. ________
Washington D.C. It is about 220 miles in the south 77. ________
of New York City. The pleasantest and easiest ways to 78. ________
get there is by train, which spends a little more money79. ________
than the bus journey and a little less than flying. It’s not city 80. ________
that has been grown up accidentally as most big cities have. 81. ________
It was carefully planned for the nation’s capital by a 82. ________
Frenchman, Perril Enfant. The city was named 83. ________
George Washington, the first president of the United States. 84. ________
In 1791 he himself bought the land which the city was built. 85. ________
第二卷(共35分)
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Last week I went to a movie, which was very moved. It was 76.______________
a sad movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a 77.______________
little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him78.______________
to rich family who had no child. The boy received a very good 79.______________
education and twenty years late became a doctor. In his hospital, 80.______________
he had a patient, who was an old lady. He didn’t care too much of 81.______________
her, for she could hardly afford the medical care. One evening, 82.______________
the lady died quietly of a serious illness but on her bed, the 83.______________
doctor found a letter, in it he discovered the truth that she was 84.______________
his mother. He had wanted to call her mother, but it was too late. 85.______________
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）如有错误（每行最多只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Considering how much time every day a student spends
read books, newspapers, letters and notices, you’ll know 76．
what a important learning skill reading is. One can get 77．
succeed and enjoyment throughout his life. Eighty-five 78．
per cent of university work, for example, need reading. 79．
Reading is the understand of words and the connection 80．
between them, so never read some related words separate. Before 81．
reading, it is necessary to decide what you read is worth 82．
reading or not. While reading, it’s necessary to decide what is worth 83．
taking notice of. Try to grasp the main idea of what you are reading it. 84．
A good student will always try to find out his weakness so as improve 85．
his reading habits and his reading skills.