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Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waiting, he helps the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.
Peter was walking back home from school, thought about the 1.
class today. It was about giving the first aid. Suddenly he saw 2.
a young girl lay on the ground. She seemed to be asleep but Peter 3.
saw that her face was very pale. He walked up to the girl and call4.
softly,“Miss, Miss.” She moved slightly and gave no clear response .5.
He put her hand under her nose. Yes, she was even breathing . Then he 6.
suddenly saw that it was a wound on her left leg and blood was flowing 7.
out. She might have hit by a car. He dialled 120 and called an ambulance8.
while waited for it, then he put the girl in the recovery position by 9.
roll her onto one side and placing her left upper arm under her chin. 10.
It was snowing heavy on Monday morning. Li Hua was at 1.
the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601 to go to school. After a 2.
while a bus came and she got on it. There had many passengers 3.
in the bus. Some were talking and some were looking out the 4.
windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. A driver turned around 5.
and said“Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off 6.
and help push the bus.”When he heard this, Li Hua and the other 7.
passengers got off the bus. They worked hardly together, pushing 8.
the bus slowly forward. Soon the bus was running again. All 9.
the passengers were smiling but the sun was shining. 10.
One Sunday morning, Li Ming and his grandpa are 1.
feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy 2.
because it had enough food and water. Li Ming.did not 3.
know why not. The next morning on his way to school, 4.
Li Ming saw some birds flew in the sky. Then he thought 5.
about the lonely bird in the cage. He decided to persuade his 6.
grandpa to set the bird free. When he got to home, he said 7.
to his Grandpa,“Birds also need friends!” To his delighted , his 8.
grandpa agreed.The bird set free. Grandpa and the children 9.
were very happy to see the bird flying away in the sky. 10.
Jack was a heavy smoker. His mother didn't like him smoking,and 1.
he couldn't give it up. At about 9 o'clock in one evening, Jack was seen 2.
smoking in the living-room again. “Don't smoke in the living-room, 3.
Jack!”said his mother in an unhappy voice. Heared this,Jack went 4.
back his own room and shut the door. While he was sitting in bed, 5.
he couldn't help smoke again. About an hour later,Jack's mother 6.
smell heavy smoke. She got up and opened Jack's bedroom. Good heavens! 7.
Jack's quilt was burning while he was sleep! She quickly got some 8.
water and put up the fire. Jack was given a good lesson. “I'll give up 9.
smoking from now on, Mum.”Jack said in low but determined voice.10.
One day Daddy and I was going for a walk around the 1.
lake while a girl rode past us quickly. Suddenly we heard 2.
a cry for a help. The girl had fallen into the lake with her 3.
bike. Daddy and I ran quickly towards her. We manage 4.
to pull her out the water. Then the girl asked us if we could 5.
help getting the bike out of the water. Then the girl asked 6.
us if we could help get the bike out of the lake. Daddy was 7.
only too ready to help him. When we pulled her bike out, 8.
she rode away even with saying “ Thanks ” to us. 9.
I felt quite disappointing at her deed. 10.