假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。短文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Cathy,
I’m writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.
I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.
What’s more, beauty is just skin deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win other’s respect.
As the saying goes, never judge the person by appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.
Yours,
Jane
The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is where people1.___________
go to practise their speaking English. Every Sunday afternoon2.___________
they gather around, talk to each other in English. Among3.___________
they are students, teachers, doctors, and so on. I first went to an4.___________
English Corner when I was in Junior Grade Two. I went there on5.___________
every Sunday and chat with some people in English. In the6.___________
past three years I had never been absent. I’m sure I’ve made7.___________
some progresses in my listening and speaking. And I have8.___________
made many friends there. The English Comer is really good9.___________
place. I hope that more friends will join in us.10.___________
I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is 1.___________
my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a2.___________
bike. Ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. I3.___________
use my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warm4.___________
and dry. It can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold and5.___________
rain is pouring down. It can also be very danger. Of course6.___________
I will be very careful on my bike. In facts, accidents are not7.___________
the only problem. One day I went to school and come back8.___________
to find his front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to9.___________
the repairer’s shop. Now I have two strong locks.10.___________
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I've really got to do something to lose weight because
I'm getting much too fat. I wasn't worried about it until I go
1._________
to see the doctor. He told me that I'd probably had a heart
2._________
attack while I started eating less. When you're on a diet you
3._________
have to stop eat too much even though you are always hungry.
4._________
They may be very hard to do and you certainly need a lot
5._________
of will-power to succeed. So I will stay on a health farm for a
6._________
month I won't be able to eat much and so I'li have to stick
7._________
to my diet. I'll also do plenty of exercise, which won't give
8._________
me any harm too. Both the diet and the exercise will
9._________
help me to lose weight and feel more better.
10._________
He left the party even without speaking “Goodbye” to me.
Are they still for holiday in Beijing now?They should have come back now.