假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; .
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to
each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along
with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.
So I had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new
apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to
the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He
says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in
the future.
短文改错(满分10分)
After I finished the school this year,I began to |
91._________ |
look for work. Now several month later, I still didn't |
92._________ |
find the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning |
93._________ |
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith. |
94._________ |
He said to me on the phone, "I hear you do very |
95._________ |
well in your studies. I may give a job for you." I entered |
96._________ |
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I |
97._________ |
will go through the job -hunting talk today and he would |
98._________ |
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, |
99._________ |
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. |
100.________ |
每句只有一个错误。按下列情况改正: 该句多一个词,把多余的词用斜线( \ ) 划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉; 该句缺一个词,在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该句右边横线上写出该加的词;该句错一个词,在错的词下划一横线,在该句右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:不要改动原句的意思。
61. Each time when we celebrate a festival it changes a little. 61.___________
62. Oprah Winfrey makes possible to talk about great moments and difficulties in people’s lives in her television shows.
62.___________
63. Mianyang lies to the northwest of Sichuan.63.___________
64. Dustin Hoffman is famous as his role acting as a woman.64.___________
65. Dated back to the Qin Dynasty, the traditional crosstalk shows have made people all over China roar with laughter for centuries.
65.___________
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. I have problem to ask66._________
you for help. A few days before, one of my very good 67._________
friend told me that he was going to leave school. 68._________
He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried 69._________
my best to get him to change his mind, and I failed. 70._________
I realize it is difficult of me to persuade him. He 71._________
is not doing so good in his studies. The process is 72._________
more important than the result. Now there are only 73._________
90 days being left before the test. I am not sure 74._________
his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.75._________
Gao Fei
第二卷(非选择题,35分)
Ⅴ.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误,则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:每行只有一个错误;原行没有错的不要改。
One day I happen to find a chatting room in my QQ, 76.
there people were chatting in English.I tried to chat with 77.
some of them.To my surprised, I found the oral English 78.
of some students were better than mine. 79.
I asked him for advice and they told me to practice more 80.
on QQ.But every day after that I would spend one 81.
hour practice my oral English on QQ. 82.
Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. 83.
With time going by, I found that I could even 84.
communicate some college students freely. 85.
第四部分:写作(共两节,满分20分)
第一节:改错: 请找出下列短文中的错误,并改正。
注意, 没有错误的不用改。(每小题0.5分共5分)
I was used to complain about my English teacher 1.___________
for his bad English. I was also tired with his teaching methods, 2.___________
it were always slow and boring. However, my attitude towards3.___________
him began to change after one afternoon. It was raining 4.___________
heavy and I didn’t attend school. Around 5:30 pm I received 5.___________
a phone call. “Are you all right?” asked my English teacher in quiet 6.___________
voice. On hearing her words, I was shocked and my mind was 7.___________
flooded with mixed feeling. He was showing his concern 8.___________
for me, though I have not been happy with him! Was he just 9.___________
acting and should I smooth away my past misunderstanding of him? 10.___________