下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修-优题课

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。
I am a senior high school student. In my opinion, the classroom is place for students to gain knowledges. So quietness is badly need for us to learn in the classroom. But recently some students have brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of the ring of mobile phones. Some of them even wasted precious time in class type short messages on the mobile phones. To keep the classroom quietly and make us focus more on their studies, I suggest that mobile phones shouldn’t be used in the classroom. At least, they should be used where we are having a class.

I was used to be the shyest person in the world. I often hide behind my mother whenever there came a visitor. When asking to speak in class, I could hard breathe. Then in the seven grade, I had a new English teacher, Miss Creen. One day, he asked me a question but I didn’t know the answer of it. I stood there, not knowing what to say. Learning that I was a shy person after class, she gave me some advices. She said, “Remember to smile after doing everything, and you’ll feel good about yourself.” Now I’m not a shy person. With smile, I can meet people without being afraid.

英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I go abroad for further studies half a year ago. I received a lot of present. All were wrapped in color paper. Among them was two presents which really interested in me. My sister bought me the book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of differently countries in it. My brother gave me a note saying, “My present for you has been put in my bedroom.” While I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box in it. Open the box, I found a pocket computer. I was very glad. I understood these two presents would be great help to me in improving my English.

文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Frankenstein dreams to give life to a living body. Finally, used bones from dead bodies, he creates a monster whose resembles a human being. And when he finishes, the beauty of the dream vanishes, and horror and disgust filled his heart. The creature is extremely ugly, terrifying anyone who sees it. His black hair and white teeth contrast horribly to his wrinkled yellow skin. However, he is intelligent and have human emotions. When Frankenstein refuses to create a wife for him, he murders the scientist’s relatives. Thus, the scientist chases the monster not to destroy him. In the end, all of them die in the snow.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线
上画一个勾（√）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词的下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的请不要改。

Bob and Jim once worked in a same factory. One day,
Bob borrowed Jim some money, but later Jim left his job
and went to work in another town without pay back the
money. Bob didn’t see Jim for a year, and then he knows
from another friend what Jim was in another town and
staying at a hotel. So he went to see Jim in the evening.
When he got to Jim’s room, Bob saw his shoe lying outside
the door. “Well, he must in,” he thought. So he knocked at
the door and said, “I know you are in, Jim. Yours shoes are
here.” “I’m out without them,” answered to Jim.

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