假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Great changes have been taken place in my village. Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste. As the result, the lake was serious polluted. To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust. Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil. Now the poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings. The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees. On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear sir,
I'm glad to recommend （推荐）you to my friend Li Ming．Li Ming was born in July 15 , 1974 in Beijing．He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986．
When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art．After graduating from No．4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics．After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study．Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year．He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．
Looking forward to receive your early reply．
此题要求改正所给句子中的错误。
每句只有一个错误。若该句多一个词，把多余的词用（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。若该句缺一个词，在缺词处用一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。若该句错一个词，在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：不要改动原句的意思。Berners-Lee made possible for everyone to use the Internet, not just the army.
The more closer you are, the more you will see.
My English teacher explains grammar so clearly that I feel I can make great progresses with her.
This is the first time that Edward visited our hometown Mian Yang.
You can shorten the words by taking out unimportant letters in them and use numbers instead of words when sending a text message.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As senior three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with my parents. I always feel gratitude for their unselfish care and love. Thanks to their constant encouragement, I have made rapidly progress in my studies.
It will be less than one month since the final exam, so I’m under the pressure now. I would appreciate if they could have a frequent talk with me but provide me with timely help, which contributes to keep a good state.
I have made up my mind to study hard, for I believe hard work was the key to success. Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in various sports activity to build up my body.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Li Ying often forgets something, but her classmates call her “Miss Forgetful”. One day, her mother asked her buy something and gives her a shopping list. When she got to the shop, she bought all the things on the lists. Then it was time to pay to them, but she forgot to take money with her, which was left on the dining table at home. So she has had to go back to fetch the money. When she finally went back to a shop again, she paid money but forgot to take that she had bought. Lucky, the shop owner called him back in time.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam，
My name is Li Hua. I am writing to apply to be volunteer to take care of our school flowers and trees during the winter vacation.I believe this job suits me perfect.
On the one hand, that I am fond of is growing flowers and I have the experience to look after the flowers and trees well. On the another hand, it is not far from my home to our school. However I have enough time to work, which was a great advantage over other students. I’m convincing that as a volunteer I can do the job more better.
Thank you very much for read my application. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully,