短文改错
The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.
One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. In that case we are possible to neglect the details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Yan was awarding the title of “Star Student of the Week” because what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yan went to downtown and walked from one store to other, looking for the clothes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure times in cool rooms, she spends the whole afternoon searching for the right clothes. Deeply moved by her, we tried our best and won first prize in the contest. Li Yan is always warm-hearted and care a lot about the class. Beside, she often devotes her spare time to help others. She has set the good example for us.
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries. Three hours ago, with full bags of goods in both hands, she headed for nearby bus stop, tired and hungry. She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain. After what seemed ages, came a bus, crowded of passengers. When it was her turn to getting on the bus, someone said, “ Sorry, no more rooms.”Quite disappointed, my sister had to take a taxi. Half way home, therefore, the taxi broke down. Hardly had he got out of the taxi when a bus passed by. It was empty, but she had been missed it! What an unluckily day!
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I showed my friend Peter around Beijing city. We start off early on the morning. First we went to the Forbidden City, where is one of the most popular tourist place in Beijing．Then we visited the History Museum．We observed a lot valuable things in it but we learned a lot about Chinese history．After a quick lunch, we went to Beihai Park．Upon our arrival, we were all struck by its beautiful scenery．We had a great fun in the park．We didn’t go back until late in the afternoon. Peter was very pleased with my arrangement that he invited me to a good western restaurant to have a big meal．
We did have a wonderfully time. What an unforgettable experience it was!
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右
边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（\）划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.
He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
I want to share with you a true story, happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of whom got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the serious of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.