短文改错
The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good.
One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. In that case we are possible to neglect the details. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
One day while David was walking, he saw an old man struggled in the river. Quick he ran over and pulled the old man out. After he came back in life, the old man told to David he could give anything. David wanted because he was rich. David laughed. He doesn't believe the old man was rich. But he didn't want anything. Then he thought of something. "I want my dad to have job", he said. "Right." said the old man. "What's her telephone number?"
When David got home his dad said that he got a phone call just now and that one of the biggest corporation in the USA has offered him a job.
假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, the English language has different variety. As matter of fact, there are
no significant differences between them. These varieties tend to be resemble either the American or British English. For example, Australian English general uses the same spelling like British English. Meanwhile, they had their own ways of pronouncing words, their own special vocabulary and even their own grammatical
rules. For example, in British English, you can say, “I haven’t any money.” So in American English you’d say, “I don’t have some money.” So it was said by Bernard Shaw what England and America are two countries separate by the same
language.”
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。全文共十处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。
此句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
此句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在正下方写出该加的词。
此句错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该词正下方写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改只限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Hangzhou in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I am seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from the years 1984 and 1990. After that I went to the No. 20 MiddleSchool. The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry or computer.I liked English and computer best and I was very good at it. Last year I had won the first prize in the school computer competition. I have many hobbies now. I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sport are swimming in summer and skate in winter.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, I decided real buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.
He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’ t afford such an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,so it was much better than the old one.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文章中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词出加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1， 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2， 只允许修改10 处， 多者 （从第11 处起）不计分。
All parents wish their children, especially junior high students, can go to top university and have a bright future. So they always expects their children to make fully use of their time to study . They don’t allow them watching TV ,play the computer games or go out to play with their friends . Some students just complained that their parents are only concerned about their grades and not their other needs.
In my opinion ,how our parents are doing is out of nothing but love. The most important thing , I think, is that they should learn to communicate with our parents, tell them that we’ll never let them down and will work harder earn trust and respect from them.