I begin as a calculating machine in 1642. I could “think” logically and produce an answer quicker than any person. On 1936, Alan Turing, wrote a book about how I could be made work as a “universal machine”. By the 1940s, I had grown as larger as a room, and I wondered if I would grow any larger. But, this reality also worried about my designers. As time went by, it was made smaller. These changes only became possibly as my memory improved. But I was always so lonely standing there by myself, until later they gave me family connected by a network. I was able to share my knowledges with others through the World Wide Web.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
1． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear John,
Last summer, I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closely to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five
hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ù)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
As a student, Li Hua works very harder at his lessons, so he is always one of the top student in our class. He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends. Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons, so she always helps them after class.
As a monitor, Li Hua has organized some voluntary activities successful. We visit a nursing home last month, and we pick rubbish in the park near our school every week. What we do is warmly welcomed by the community. This is how Li Hua is so popular.
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I paid a visit to the Hong’en Temple Park with my friends. The park was full of fresh and beauty flowers. When I was enjoying the wonderful scenery around, something unpleasant catch my eye. A young couple on the grass was eating, talking and laughing loudly even if they were the only people in the world. What’s better, they spat and even threw rubbish onto the grass, ignoring the sign “No littering” nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me in thought. If all visitors to the Hong’en Temple Park do as the young couples did, the park will be severely polluting and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think both of us should mind our behavior in the public places. Only in this way can we live more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分）
下文中共有10处错误。在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am a 18 year-old middle school student．I have been busy in my study and seldom helped my parents with the houseworks．Feeling quite sorry for that, and I begin to think about what to do to help．Last Sunday, when my parents went out shop, I suddenly got an idea: why not giving the rooms a throughout cleaning? Firstly I collected both the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put it in place．Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture．After that, I swept and mopped the floors．At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprising to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining．My mother gave me a hug and I see satisfaction in her eyes．Tired as I was, I never felt so happy．
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient but considerate．Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decide to make the best use for it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties, they were always helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are．