请对下面的短文进行修改。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with
my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.
改错(满分10分)
I sometimes argue with my mother about if I can watch TV after school. She holds the
view which Senior students have to devote all their time to work hard at their lessons. It
seems to me that once I allowed to do that, I’ll be unable to control me and forget all about
my study .She also thinks it is bad for my eye. Actually I quite understand her, but I really
couldn’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard
work .Besides, it is important for us to know what have happened at home and at abroad.
Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
第二节.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1. 5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city 76______
to you. Our city is a newly-built modern city. It is set up in 77______
the early 1990s, but it has been developing rapid. From 78______
here you can travel to anywhere by water, by air and 79_______
by land. Recently a new freeway is connected 80______
with Beijing has been used. The place around our city 81______
are rich in natural resources. And they have enough supplies 82______
of electricity and other forms of energy. The public order 83______
is very well. Besides, the people of our city are warm-hearted 84_______
and we like to make friends by people all over the world. 85______
That’s all. Thank you.
第三节 短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断∶
如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误), 则按下列情况改∶该行多一个词∶ 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词∶ 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词∶ 在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意∶ 原行没有错的不要改。
I’m the only daughter of my parents. But they worry 76. __________
about everything I do. For example, when I ride my bike, my 77. __________
parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might 78. __________
fall off from my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble 79. __________
to support a bike, with my mother even carrying a first-aid box. 80. __________
I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?” 81. __________
Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything 82. __________
for their children. This does no good to them. Too many love from 83. __________
parents may prevent them from independent. In my opinion, 84. __________
parents should let their children do that they should do alone. 85. __________
第二节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处如一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Charlie Lee, aged fifteen, and his sister Roseanne,
earn their pocket money by washing his father’s car, 76. ________
watering the plants, cleaning the balcony, and do 77. ________
odd (临时的) jobs around a house. Their parents prefer giving 78. ________
them money for doing jobs to buying them present. 79. ________
Charlie and Roseanne usually receives about $25 for 80. ________
each job. They often bargain their father over the pay 81. ________
and the job to be done. Mrs. Lee said, “We were 82. ________
teaching them that the money doesn’t come out of 83. ________
nowhere. It means more to them if they feel that they’ve 84. ________
earned it but they better understand the value of things. 85. ________
第五部分写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边的横线上划(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
That Saturday when I entered into an underpass, I 86.
heard a beautiful sound. It makes me very happy. 87.
It was darkness there, but I could judge where the sound 88.
came. I walked towards a corner. An old man was sitting 89.
there, wears shabby clothes. He was playing erhu, “Oh, it is 90.
a beggar,” I thought. On that moment a man came by and dropped 91.
one Yuan in the beggar box. The old man stopped 92.
to say “Thank you”. He then groped (摸) on the ground. 93.
While he found the box, he picked up the money. He felt 94.
it and smiled. What beautiful the music was! It was 95.
played by a blind person. I just admired him.