假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning, our school holds a fire drill(演练). We were listening the teacher attentively in the math class after we heard the fire alarm from the speaker on the wall. The teacher stopped teach immediately and organized us to exit the classroom quickly. When we got into the passageway, we found us surrounded by smoke. It was chocking but our tears ran down. We students bent down, covered our mouth with handkerchiefs, and running downstairs rapidly into the open on the playground, just as we had been taught ago. Fire disasters are often seeing on TV and read about in the newspaper. We should know the skill to escape from the fire in case of emergency.
Mark Twain, like you know, was famous in his days as the public speaker. He always liked to
play joke on his friends. One day, the one of his friends lost their wallet and asked him to buy a
train ticket for him. “But I don’t have enough money to pay both your ticket and mine,” Mark
Twain said. The friend didn’t know what to do. “Let’s do this, “ Mark Twain saying, “You can
get off the train and when the conductor comes to check the ticket you can hide under my seat.”
Later, however, when the conductor comes to check the ticket, Mark Twain gave him two
tickets-----one for him and the other for his friend.
请仔细阅读下列短文并改正其中的10个错误。
Recently, students in our class have had a discussion on whether space is worthy exploring.
30% of us thinks space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is so far away from us and our daily life. And the money spending on space exploration can be used to solve the earth problems such as starvation and pollution.
In the other hand, 70% think that space worth exploring because we have benefited a lot for it, such as using satellites for communication and to weather forecast. What’s more, with further space research, we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. Also, space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energetic shortages on the earth.
四、写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误,请找出,并按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:请在答题卡上作答。
Long long ago,people have to gather leaves and76. ___________
fruit of plants to eat .We didn’t know how 77. ___________
to plant crops and how to keep animals for their 78. ___________
food.We call them Stone Age people.Thing for 79. ___________
them were terrible and hard.Now there have still80. ___________
some people lived like those Stone Age people. 81. ___________
They live in places that are hard reach.They do 82. ___________
not know our inventions,for they keep themselves 83. ___________
away from our civilized world.For the many years 84. ___________
a group of people called Aruntas have lived lonely 85. ___________
in the center of Australia.
第二节 短文改错(每小题1分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如无错误,在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上,用斜线(﹨)划掉;
此行缺一个词:在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词,并附带前(后)词;
此行错一个词:在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。
My hometown is a large city on the north of ⒈____________
China. People there live a very good life. There are ⒉____________
many factories and department store in the city. ⒊____________
Recently many old houses have replaced by many ⒋____________
tall buildings. Roads and streets have become more ⒌____________
longer and wider. What’s more, there were a lot of ⒍____________
universities here, that are very famous in China. In ⒎____________
the past few years, great changes have been taken ⒏____________
place here. I hope it will become more and more ⒐____________
beautifully in the future. In a word, I love my hometown. ⒑____________
第二节 短文改错(每小题1分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如无错误,在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一词:把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上,用斜线(\)划掉;
此行缺一词:在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词,并附带前(后)词;
此行错一词:在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。
It’s a story happened five years ago. Li Hua, who lived in the ⒈________
city, came to visit her uncle in our village. She and me became ⒉________
good friend. One day, I went to her uncle’s to do homework ⒊________
with her. But she wasn’t in. I found beautiful clock on her bed. ⒋________
I became very curiously and took it to have a look. Since I ⒌________
have never seen a clock before, I touched it here and there. ⒍________
But suddenly, I found the clock wasn’t working. I felt worrying ⒎________
and wanted to run away. But I didn’t. Later on that day, I told ⒏________
Li Hua that I had broken her clock. She smiled at me, saying ⒐________
that her little cousin had dropped it onto the ground this morning⒑________
and it had stopped working since then.