假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I called my classmate and asked him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my head teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well to improving my writing. That was really good idea! That they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
 Dear Mary,
 I am sorry that you had a disagreement with your father. Personal, 76. ________
 I think this is important to follow your interests and your abilities, 77. ________
 but it sounds as though you have plenty of both of these already. 78. ________
 Speak to your father and tell him what you are doing well in the79. ________
 subject of your choice. Furthermore, remind him that many men80. ________
 have chosen to work in fields that are not used to accept women. 81. ________
 Ask your father to speak to your teachers and find out how well 82. ________
 you are at your chosen subject. Trust you. Trust your own83. ________
 thinking and your choice. Hopefully, your father will respect84. ________
 your choice and let you to do what you want to. 85. ________
 Best wishes.
 Amy
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
 It’s well known which Wilma Rudolph is the first American woman76. _____
 to have won three Olympic gold medal in track! However, when77. _____
 she was young, she was sick most of the time. At four, he couldn’t 78. _____
 move her left leg as a result of a serious illness. Followed the 79. _____
 doctor’s advice, her mother rubbed her sick leg every day and take80. _____
 her to the hospital once a week. After a year, Wilma could manage 81. _____
 a sort of jump. At eight, she was walking a bit at the aid of a82. _____
 walking stick. Soon she was out in the yard playing the basketball.83. _____
 Her mother was surprising to see that. Little by little,84. _____
 Wilma became famous as a track star but won medals.85. _____
This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._______
 the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2. _______
 Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3. _______
 but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just  4. _______
 couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 5. _______
 about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in  6. _______
 the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It 7. _______
 isn't a good time to do that, dear. ’ At once I apologize 8. _______ 
 controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 9. _______
 know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month. ” 10. _______
It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much1. _______
 I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my2. _______ 
 first visit to a English family. At first, I was worried about my3. _______
 poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for 4. _______
 me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew 5. _______
 that everything would be all right. There are many more happy 6. _______ 
 memories of the week that I will keep with me forever. I particularly 7. _______ 
 enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the 8. _______
 changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the 9. _______
 fishing trip. It was such much fun. 10. _______
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet. I was then 1. _______
 in a school for students from Tibet. As we were all left home 2. _______
 at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We 3. _______
 had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However,  4. _______
 we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life.  5. _______
 At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool 6. _______
 or go for a picnic. We were living in a big family. We treat  7. _______
 each other as brothers and sisters. If any one of us had any 8. _______
 difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.  9. _______
 It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories 10. _______
 are as sweet as ever before.