假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处叫个娄子符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Story about Growth is my favorite American TV play because it is very interested. The play tells humorous stories that happen in the Green’s family. With such stories it make people think about life, but therefore attracts the audience. It is also a window which we can learn about American society. And there were many meaningful things that are worth think of, such as the relationship between parents and children in a lot of American family. It is quite different from those in China. The play is very popular. We’d better not to miss the chance to enjoy it.
短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
Are the years you spent at school best years of your life?
Personally , I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to
sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers
were saying. They were used to write on the blackboard and ask
us difficult questions. We also had to do piles of homework , and
hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of
rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books
at the public library , and late I decided to attend college. Now
I really enjoy study because I’m growing old and know what I
want it. When I was at school , I was just the wrong age!
对标有题号的每一行做了判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划对号:如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下面情况改正:
此行多一词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词:在错词的下面划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原文没有错误不要改。
I have a good friend which, name is Liu Mei.She is our
monitor and one of the..excellent students in our class.
Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a
lot on common and have.a lot to talk about.One evening she
told me that something happened when her parents was out.
She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when
she smelt something burning.She stopped look out'
of the window and find.-a-cloud of smoke coming out
of her neighbor's house.- She called 119 immediate.Ten
minutes later, the firemen :came and put out fire.Her neighbor
was very thankful for her help.
短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
Are the years you spent at school best years of your life?
Personally , I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to
sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers
were saying. They were used to write on the blackboard and ask
us difficult questions. We also had to do piles of homework , and
hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of
rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books
at the public library , and late I decided to attend college. Now
I really enjoy study because I’m growing old and know what I
want it. When I was at school , I was just the wrong age!
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面加上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In early 1800’s a new kind of power changed transportation and trade along the Mississippi River. This power was a steam. People already knew that how to use steam engines to run machines. Some people wanted to move boats by the same way. The first steamboats to travel on the Mississippi was the “New Orleans”, which made its first trip in 1811. It was a great successful, and by 1819 there were 191 steamboats travel on the long river. In the past, the farmers products went to other parts of the country used steamboats. The manufacturers whose trade depend on cheap and easy transportation used steamboats so well.
下面短文中有8处语言错误,请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在漏字符号下边写出应加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下边写出改正后的词。
注意:1改错格式错误或改在试卷上一律不给分。 2 只允许修改8处,多者(从第9处起)不计分。
My interest has been in books instead in food since Iwent to high school. In the past I was real
interestedin all kinds of food. In summer day I liked to buy ice creamand cold drinks, while in winter I like to buy sweetsand some another food. Whenever I went for a walk with myparents I would ask them buy me something.However, after I went to high school, I found I was puttingon weight. So, I gave up habit of eating and began to spend money on all kinds of books, and myparents are always complaining that I am a money spender!