假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, some college students are busy finding variety of methods to make money during their free time. Some people believed that it is great. In such a competitive society, experience is becoming very more and more important. Doing part-time jobs are a good way to get experience. And it also helps to reducing parents’ financial stress. Others, therefore, argue that students’ duty is nothing but study. On the one hand, part-time jobs may have a negative effect in their studies. On the other hand, students may do something wrong because they are so young to tell good from bad. In my opinion, as soon as they arrange their time reasonably, we are sure to get good grades and work experience.
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy．Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight．I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit．Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”．However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables．On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food．Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong．In my opinion, we must take action to change them．
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The problem is too difficult for us to solve it.
It was generous for her to give the beggar so much money.
Meetings and appointments take away most of my time.
As melly gas came out from the cracks of the well.
The computer was broke down. It needs repairing.
Andrew as well as Martin and Jim are fond of music.
You’ll regret to have said those words.
In 1983,therewereonly 200 computers connecting to the Internet.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found
a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my
best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked
after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother
came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with
each other, the world will become more beautiful.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出增加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
One day, while my friend and I was traveling through Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little money. We decided to stop at a village market to buy something to eat. We choose
the cheapest biscuits and ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great.“Let’s gets some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they really taste well.” My friend could read some Germans, but I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name. She looked it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?” I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965．When I was a child, I dreamed flying in the sky．I joined the army in June, 1983．In 1992, I was sent to the air force base．In August, 1996, I become one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilot through the physical examination．I worked hardly, so I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998．
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I was choosed as one of the first man space aircraft astronautslater．In Oct．15, 2003, I successful flew to space, circled around the earth about 14 circles and then returned．I was honored to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．