文中共有l0处语言错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Great Wenchuan Earthquake was shocked we Chinese. Most people took out some of their money help the injured people. But our class were organized to collect money in the street at weekend. My team sent to a park. As soon as we get there, we began to work. We put up notices to tell people we were students from high school to collected money with the injured people in this Great Wenchuan Earthquake. When people saw us, they gave us their money generous. And soon we accepted a lot of money, we all felt the society is full of love. Though we were tired that day, we felt very happy.
Mr. Black,
We're very gladly to have received your money and some reading materials. Thank you very much. We had been studying hard since we came back to school. Under the help of our teachers and classmates, we have made great progresses in our studies. So we often praised and encouraged by our teachers and parents. We have made up our minds to study hard than before to learn every subject good in order to be admitted to key universities in the future.We're looking forward to see you, but we have no chance to go to the Hangzhou ourselves. So we hope you can post us a photo of yours soon.
Best wishes,
Yours,
如下短文共有10处错误,每句中错误最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。按以下要求进行修改:
1)增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词;
2)删词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
3)修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Do you prefer to travel by plane or by train? To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages traveling both by plane and by train. Travel by plane is time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest on the trip,but it is too expensive. Unless you travel by train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can appreciate the beautiful scenery on both side of the railway. However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, and we can take a good rest. So you can see every coin has two sides. You'd better to choose either of them depend on your own interest and economy.
每句中最多有一处错误。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在改句后面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该句后面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;She could hardly afford for the medical care.
Now people get a lot of informations from TV.
Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down.
There were too many nice things that I didn’t know what to choose.
We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago.
Some parents think useless for girls to go to school.
I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.
Filling with many people, the room is crowded.
She was a child star and began to perform in the age of four.
It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my MP3 player. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to pay my attention on my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is true which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在下面加上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is know to us all, paper burns easy. Yesterday, Mike, a six-year-old boy, made a paper box and then filled it for water. He then lit a candle and tries to burn the paper box. Much to his surprises, the paper box didn’t catch fire. Such curious was the child about the experiment that he asked his father endless questions about it. His father, which is a teacher in a primary school, didn’t know how to ask these questions, but he didn’t pretend to understand. He did everything he could help his son solve the problem. This experience made Mike interesting in the study of modern science.