假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._______
 the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2. _______
 Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3. _______
 but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just  4. _______
 couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 5. _______
 about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in  6. _______
 the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It 7. _______
 isn't a good time to do that, dear. ’ At once I apologize 8. _______ 
 controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 9. _______
 know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month. ” 10. _______
It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much1. _______
 I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my2. _______ 
 first visit to a English family. At first, I was worried about my3. _______
 poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for 4. _______
 me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew 5. _______
 that everything would be all right. There are many more happy 6. _______ 
 memories of the week that I will keep with me forever. I particularly 7. _______ 
 enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the 8. _______
 changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the 9. _______
 fishing trip. It was such much fun. 10. _______
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet. I was then 1. _______
 in a school for students from Tibet. As we were all left home 2. _______
 at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We 3. _______
 had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However,  4. _______
 we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life.  5. _______
 At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool 6. _______
 or go for a picnic. We were living in a big family. We treat  7. _______
 each other as brothers and sisters. If any one of us had any 8. _______
 difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out.  9. _______
 It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories 10. _______
 are as sweet as ever before.
Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1. _______
 hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year 2. _______
 more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3. _______
 and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting 4. _______
 your collection of stamps are easy became they are everywhere.  5. _______
 Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6. _______
 from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7. _______
 the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 8. _______
 will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 9. _______
 which exist to add more stamps to your collection.  10. _______
During the summer of 2001, I started reading books
 in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new 1._______
 words from these books, but I had terribly problems 2._______
 memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word 3._______
 many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized 4._______
 I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was 5._______
 a great achievement for myself. I started writing down 6._______
 words from books that I read. I would come back from 7._______
 school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down 8._______
 new words and added it to my collection. By the end 9._______
 of last year,my collection has grown to 3,000 words. 10._______