假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不记分。
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
My classmate LiuXin became crazily about a popular___________
star last year. She now listens his songs, buys his pictures____________
and goes to his concerts wherever they are.She seems___________
to have lost interest on her studies.All that shw wants_______
is to know about his latest news.As the result, she has fallen__________
behind others.We are all very worried about her and wanted_________
to help her,but she doesn’t follow our advices.Our teacher___________
Mr Chen has told her parents about this.They are surprising________
and sad.I don’t think Liu Xin is the only girl who are crazy_________
about popular stars.What can we do it to help them out?_________
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边的横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(划掉,并在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线(划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
We are all busy talking about and use the Internet_________
which set up in the 1960s. At first, the Internet was _________
only used by the government, but in the early 1970s_________
the universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to _________
use it, either. However, computers were still very expensive _________
and the Internet was difficult to use it. By the beginning of _________
the 1990s, computers had became cheaper and easier. _________
Today it is easy to get on-line and it is saying _________
that millions people use the Internet every day. _________
Send e-mail is more and more popular among students. _________
It has now become one of the most important parts of people’s life.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如有错误(每行只有
一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜
线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:每行都有一个错误。
I was a honest child indeed.I didn’t dare to tell lies
because of my eyes often let the secret out .I remembered
telling a lie to my parents, and I could hard fix my eyes on
my father’s face, let alone my mother eyes.I glanced
here and there, up or down, nervously.
However, after I came to Beijing, I no longer have to
worry my eyes because everything I wanted to say
was sent by letter.I found myself often tell small lies.I
wrote, “I’m fine in Beijing.I enjoy the food selling at the
university.And at the weekends, I often buy fried chickens
or pork to eat.”
短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
One day a child was playing with a vase in great value.
He careless put his hand into it.Hard as he tried,
he could not pull it out.His father tried his best, too.
but their efforts were in a vain.They were thinking of breaking
the vase when the father said, "Now, my son, why have.
one more try? Open your hand or hold your fingers out
straight as you see I doing, and then pull." To his
surprise, the child says, "I can’t hold my fingers straight
like that, because I don’t want to drop my penny." Thousand of us
sometimes are so busy hold on to the world’s worthless .
penny that we cannot achieve liberation.
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Helen,
Thank you so much for your party at Christmas Eve.All__________
of them enjoyed it very much.We liked the dishes you had_________
cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you taught _________
us.We hope you’ll teach us a lot many songs in the future._________
We’re leaving from our hometowns to spend the winter_____
vacations.It seems that many of us are homesick after_______
being away from home for such a longtime.What are your____
plans? Will you join in the tourist group organized by our school? ________
We are busy prepare for our trips.Please excuse us____
for not able to say goodbye to you._____
We hope you’ll have a good time.
Yours,
Xiao Hua