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I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But she is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila?
My favourite sport is football. I was a member of 76. ________
our school football team. We practise for three times 77. ________
every week and often watch football match on TV 78. ________
together. Play football not only makes us grow up 79. ________
tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play 80. ________
and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play 81. ________
for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches 82. ________
us the important of obedience. Each player must 83. ________
obey captain, who is the leader of the team. 84. ________
And they must not break the rules too often if we 85. ________
want to win the game.
Decorate the Christmas tree is usually a family event. For many families,
1. ________
it starts with choosing a tree from either a farm and a store. Then the tree
2. ________
is brought at home and put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up 3. ________
straight. Then everyone helps to hang balls and light. After the tree is 4. ________
decorated, a Christmas tree skirt rapped around the bottom of the tree.
5. ________
Sometime, people make all of the decorations for the tree by themselves.
6. ________
Many people collect Christmas trees decorations throughout their lifetime,
7. ________
adding a new decoration each year. Beside lights and balls, people may 8. ________
also put flowers, pine cones, strings of pop corn and garlands (花环) on the
9. ________
tree, There are as much different ways to decorate a tree as there are people!
10. ________
I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1. ________
my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might 2. ________
explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go 3. ________
near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a 4. ________
unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to 5. ________
see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes6. ________
became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the 7. ________
water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear.8. ________
The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw 9. ________
a neighbor drowned. After then I have been more frightened.10. ________
Between Virginia and Maryland on the Potomac River lie 1. ________
Washington D.C. It is about 220 miles in the south 2. ________
of New York City. The pleasantest and easiest ways to 3. ________
get there is by long-distance bus, or by the fast
(125-mile-an-hour) train which spends a little more money than 4. ________
the bus journey and a little less money than flying. I could travel far
more than 220 miles to see Washington. It’s not city that has 5. ________
been grown up accidently as most big cities have done. 6. ________
It was carefully planned for the nation’s capital by a 7. ________
Frenchman, Perril Enfant. The city was named 8. ________
George Washington, the much-loved, much-admired,
much-respected first president of the United States. 9. ________
In 1791 he himself arranged to buy the land which it stands. 10. ________
Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit 1.________
to a American family. They live in a small 2 _________
town. It was very kind for them to meet me 3.__________
at the railway station and drove me to their home 4.__________
The Smiths did his best to make me feel 5.__________
at home. They offered me coffee and other 6.__________
drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing 7.__________
together. They eager to know everything about 8.__________
China and asked me lots of question. In fact, 9 .__________
they are planning to visit China in next year. 10.__________