假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going recently? That has been a long time since we meet in China last time. Having passed the finally exams, I am busy planning a two-weeks trip to the US during this winter holiday. Do you have any suggestions about the choice of America cities? I prefer to big and modern cities. I guess I'd better book a hotel. What is the price for single boy like myself? Is it easy to find Chinese food? What is the traffic like, after I travel between cities in the US? Hope to hearing from you. Thank you!
Best regards!
Li Hua
要求:如无错误,在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√);
如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
1. 该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
2. 该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
3.该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Xiao Qiang,
Thank you very much for invite me to go and stay with
you in Suining. It’s a most beautiful cities, and I have been
eager to see you again. So I’m very sorry to tell you that I can’t
go this winter vacation, since I’ve already been promised
to stay with my grandmother in the countryside. She was
already 80 years old and misses me so much I have no choice
but to do it. I’m busy preparing to my module exams
all this days, and I feel quite sure of myself. I wish I could go
and see you at the end this year.
Best wishes to you!
Yours sincerely,
Song Jia
文中共有10处语言错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My bike was stolen outside of shop. That day I went into the shop near my home to buy an exercise books, forgetting to lock. When I came out of the shop, the bike had lost. At first, I didn’t know how to do. I could hardly believe it, because I had been in the shop only 3 and 4 minutes. Then I searched all the streets nearby, and could not find it out, so I went to the police station and reported the loss. The followed day, with a friend of mine, I went to the cinema. When I came out I found my own bike place near my friend’s.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One evening two young men were walking in the street. They tried to find a chance to steal everything. The clock struck twelve. Most people were in bed. Quickly they came to the house and it seems that everyone in the house had fallen sleep. Standing at the front gate, one man whispered in English to the other at a low voice, “You wait here. I will go around to the front door and then get into the house.” All of sudden, out of the house ran a dog, barked at them. The two men were much afraid and ran away as fast as possibly. They didn’t stop until they got to a lonely place. One man said to the other in surprise, “It’s too bad. I had thought that the dog could understand English.”
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, I was sitting in class taking notes then my teacher asked me to leave the classroom. I have no clue as to what was about to happen. I nervously walked out of the classroom and I saw my father being standing by the door. I asked him what was going. He just told me to get into his car immediately. When I got in, I found my grandparents were there, too. My grandfather told me that we were going to have dinner for mine birthday, which was actual in two days. Then, grandmother gave me a birthday card. I opened it quickly, which made everyone surprising. But they gave me a much big surprise! The card is said, “Happy birthday! We’re going to Disney World, RIGHT NOW!”
短文改错(共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
One day a child was playing with a vase in great value. He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried, he could not pull it out. His father tried his best, too, but their efforts were in a vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said,“now , my son, why have one more try? open your hand or hold your fingers straight as you saw I doing, and then pull.”to his surprise, the child says, “I can’t hold my fingers straight like that, because I don’t want to drop my penny.” Thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world’s worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberation.