(届河北省邯郸市高三第一次模拟考试英语试卷)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going recently? That has been a long time since we meet in China last time. Having passed the finally exams, I am busy planning a two-weeks trip to the US during this winter holiday. Do you have any suggestions about the choice of America cities? I prefer to big and modern cities. I guess I'd better book a hotel. What is the price for single boy like myself? Is it easy to find Chinese food? What is the traffic like, after I travel between cities in the US? Hope to hearing from you. Thank you!
Best regards!
Li Hua
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求你对一段文章改错。先对每一行作出判断是对还是错。如果是对的,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如果有错误(每行不会多于一个错误),则按情况改错如下:
此行多一个词,把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
A few months after returning the U. S. from Germany, I took 76._____
part in a college course in French. Since I have learned 77.________
to say German well in Germany, I thought it might be 78.________
interested to begin studying another language. At the 79.________
first class, a teacher asked us to do a pronunciation 80._______
exercise, in it he would say a word or two in French, and 81.________
each student would do their best to copy( 模仿). When 82.________
my turn came, he kept having me to say more words, and I 83.________
finally asked him why.“I find it great fun,”he explained 84.________
it. “In 25 years of teaching at school, it's the firsttime 85.________
I've heard an American speak French with a German accent.”
At 10 o’clock last Saturday night I came out from the 1.
cinema.It was very much cold and the road was covered with snow. 2.
SuddenlyI saw a woman fall down her bike. She couldn’t 3.
get up. I ran to her at once and try to help her to sit up.4.
She said that her right leg was broken. I was worried about5.
when a young policeman came over. He called a taxi. I took 6.
him to a hospital and telephoned her family about the matter. 7.
As I saw the woman was good looked after, I said goodbye 8.
to her.I felt happy I could help the woman but I also hope 9.
she will be soon getting well on. 10.
Yesterday morning I was going to school on our foot with Li Ming. 1.
We were talking and laughing happily on the way while a motor-bike 2.
knocked me off my bike. As a result, I seriously hurt in the left leg 3.
and could hardly stand up. Seen this, Li Ming jumped off his bike, put it 4.
aside, stopped a taxi and took me to the hospital at once. In the hospital, a 5.
doctor gave me quick examination. I was told that I had to stay there for 6.
some time. So Li Ming went out and ring up my parents. He told them what 7.
had happened to me in the street. He didn’t leave the hospital until his parents 8
arrived. I stayed in the hospital a whole day until later in the afternoon. 9.
Luckily, I can walk as better as before now. I must thank Li Ming for his help.10.
I saw a case falling off a man’s bike on my way to the 1.
cinema in this afternoon . I shouted out to the man2.
to stop. But he didn’t hear me and ride away. I was3.
wondering what to do while I had an idea. I stopped a 4.
taxi and got in it with the case. Soon I caught up with5.
the man. Got the case back, he was so thankful that he 6.
offered me some money, and I refused it politely. Then 7.
the driver took him to the cinema. When I paid him, the driver 8.
pushed my hand away and said with smile, “Neither will I 9.
accept your money”. I felt very happy though I was late for the film. 10.
If you watch ads on TV , you may find some of the ads make you feeling 1.
uncomfortable. Companies spend lot of money in ads that will encourage 2.
customers to buy its products. To do so, they employ skilled advertisers 3.
sometimes try to sell us things by making us believe that we are good enough 4.
the way we are or people will not like us unless we buy their products. 5.
The way people look and act in ads may be entertaining , and there are 6.
experts who consider some ads misleading or even dangerous. For example, 7.
ads that show beautiful people wear expensive clothes may make people feel 8.
ugly or poor. Because young people easily influenced, they may believe that 9.
what they see in the ads are real . They must buy certain products if they want 10.
others to like them because they feel they are too fat or too ugly.