假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10出语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处写一个漏字符号(
), 在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
第二节短文改错(共10小题;每小题 1.5 分, 满分 15 分)
In front of a shop, there was long line of 76._______
Bicycles. The parking attendant was busy with77._______
receiving and saw his customers off when a thief 78._______
got a chance to steal a bicycle. The thief locked the 79._______
bicycle, got on it and riding away. Seeing that, the attendant 80._______
shouted to the people who were passing by for help. And 81._______
unfortunately ,anybody reacted. Disappointed and 82._______
helplessly, the attendant watched the thief disappear. 83._______
Of course he had to pay the owner of the stealing 84._______
bicycle 400 yuan as compensation. 85._______
第Ⅱ卷(共35分)
第四部分:写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文的错误,对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉;该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧);在该行右边横线上写出该加的词;该行错一个词,在错的词下划一个横线;在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Mrs. Smith was unable to fall sleeping at night and 61.________
was very tired during the day to do anything, even the 62.________
simple things that she used to enjoy doing. She had 63.________
headaches more often, it prevented her from reading 64.________
or watched TV. The more she thought about her conditions, 65.________
the more worse she felt. At last she went to see her doctor, 66.________
whom she had known for years. The doctor listened to his 67.________
heart and said, “There is nothing serious wrong with 68.________
you, and I accept the fact you don 't feel well. Now I’ll 69.________
give you some pills (药丸)that help. Come tomorrow 70.________
morning and tell me how you felt.”
二、非选择题
1.短文改错
I don’t know John Denver. However, I’ve heard him. 25.________
He preferred country music for pop music. I like his 26._______
songs and sometimes I keep listen all day. He 27._______
made lots of records and his music had broadcast on 28.________
the radio. He was not just a singer but a song writer. 29.________
When people were angry with society but didn’t think 30.________
well of political leaders, he begins to turn to this 31.________
subject with other singers. They made o fun of them 32.________
by singing songs full of angry. Though Denver died, 33.________
country music have become more and more popular. 34.________
第II卷(非选择题满分50分)
第三部分写作(共两节,满分50分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
The day before the speech contest(比赛)English teacher 66_______
talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all 67_______
wished me success, but it didn't matter that I would 68_______
win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so 69_______
nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people 70_______
present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in 71_______
the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered 72_______
her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first 73_______
prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 74_______
Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 75_______
第二卷
第四部分写作 (共两节,满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分, 满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的借误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符(^),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
What a morning! I got early to make sure I packed 76. ______
everything I needed it for the trip. Since itwouldbe 77. ______
autumn in the U.S., I have to pack for colder weather. 78. ______
Most of my suitcase was filled with gift for friends. 79. ______
I did hope nothing would get lost on the way, especial80. ______
my camera with which to capture great moments. 81. ______
Before a quick lunch at the airport, I stepped into the 82. ______
waiting-room to wait for my flight to call. Seated here, I 83. ______
read a fashion magazine to kill my time. I was dressing 84. ______
in comfortable jeans and a casual blouse, be ready for the 85. ______
long flight, with an overnight stopover in Tokyo.