英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
How an unbelievable scene! A modern young couple were eating fruit in public and had thrown a plenty of waste on the ground. When an old cleaner came to clean up, the man was very angry. He points at the cleaner, saying in a loud voice,” How impolite ! They haven’t finished eating ! ” “How could people behave such badly ?” I thought. Obvious, in their eyes, they could do all that they liked and ignore other’s feelings. In my opinion, we should pay attention our behavior, obey public rules and respect other people’s work. We should know that civilized people are those who has good manners but a beautiful mind all the time.
第II卷（非选择题,总分35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题, 每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．However, it is
important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious
problems in our lives．Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to
act in different situations．That's why we should ask them for help first when they have
problems．Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow
them．With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right．
Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer
help all the time．
四．短文改错
This is a story told by my father: When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in th world but could make the most delicious dishes. Once, I just couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake his head, she said, “It’s not a good time to do that, dear.” I apologize and controlled me at the best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词；把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Unlike many other places, our hometown is also facing76._____
the problem of pollution. Unfortunately, people here have77._____
realized the importance of protection the natural environment.78._____
Factories have been taken measures to stop pouring polluted79._____
water into the rivers. The citizens not longer put waste, such80._____
as rubbish or human waste into the rivers. Every year, 81._____
a great number trees are planted. As a result, 82._____
the water in the rivers are becoming cleaner and cleaner. 83._____
The hills around the city were covered with green trees 84._____
and the air here is much more fresher than before.85._____
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Carlos was born in Manila in 1950, at the age of two 76．_________________
week he was taken by his father, a musician, to the United 77．_________________
States by the sea. He spent his first ten years in the American 78．_________________
Southland that he attended school. Between the ages of 10 and 18, 79．_________________
he travelled in the Southern and Western Atlantic areas, living in 80．_________________
Florida and had graduated from his school in 1968. Early in his life 81．_________________
he had a great interested in music instruments and in 1965, he 82．_________________
learned to play the piano and quick became an expert on it. 83．_________________
Since he graduation from Florida State University in 1973. 84．_________________
he has been a famous pianist. He is not marry, saying that 85．_________________
his music school comes first.
第Ⅱ卷（共45分）
第四部分：书面表达（共两节，满分45分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. A few days before, 76_______
one of my very good friend told me that he was going77_______
to stop the school. He said that he wanted to start his 78_______
own business. I tried best to get him to change his mind, 79_______
but I failed.
I know it is difficult of him to change his mind.80_______
He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to 81_______
insist that I give it a try. The process is more 82_______
important than the results. Now there are only 60 days 83_______
left before that test. I am not sure that his decision is 84_______
right or wrong . I needed your advice. 85_______