英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The annual English Festival, which was lasted one week, has just ended. There were all kinds of colorful activities, included an English speech competition. Last Friday, we had an honor of inviting Professor Smith to deliver a lecture on English cultural background information, such as English idiom. He was very learned and humorous that he began his lecture with an amusing story to attract the attention of the audience and all of us was deeply impressed with his wisdom. We admired him and took notes carefully, for he made himself understood with speaking slowly and clearly enough for us to follow her. He gave us some practically ways to develop the sense of language and encouraged us to keep speaking English as much possible in our daily life.
Michael was walking along the street other __________
day.Then he felt someone calling his name. __________
He stopped and looked around.He was Jack_________
Smith were running after him.Michael and__________
Jack went to the same school and then to__________
same university.So they hadn’t met each other_________
ince then.They decide to have lunch together. __________
They went to the nearest restaurant and sat by the _________
table near the window.Then they talked about that __________
they had done since they graduated university __________
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加一个漏符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Wang Ping,
I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me two weeks before. I’ve been thinking about the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finish your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know that a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For other reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as we are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return back. So what are you waiting for?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may be often feel lonely. That’s why you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices below.
First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will always ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, when I can introduce you to others.
As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you.
Best regards.
Peter
I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years before. It was really huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eye. Later on, unlike other girls, I was volunteered to go waterskiing alone. I took on the life jacket, got off the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possibly.
The lake seemed broad and endless. I was so exciting to appreciate the beauty of the mountains and waters that I speed my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found me in the middle of the endless lake. I really enjoyed the unforgettable experience!
It was a chance of a lifetime to win first________
prize on the Story Writing Show.All I had to do________
was to write a story or present it.My teachers________
have been telling me how great my writing was. ________
So if they had said was true,I would have a chance________
of winning the prize.What were better,I had useful________
help.There was Uncle Chen,gentleman living________
near my house,who was a very much famous writer. ________
He agreed to reading my story and give me some________
advices on how to write like a real writer. ________