假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have some study tip to share with you. First, be sure to discuss your needs with your teacher. He and she may have great advice for you. Second, in the classroom, be sure to listen careful to your teacher and making notes so that you can review later. Ask questions unless something is unclear. Third, see if you can do your homework soon after arriving to home. That way, things you’ve learned will fresh in your mind. When you do your homework, you are practicing that you’ve learned. At last, if you study and review your notes every day, you will have to struggle to learn many things before a test. And when you do a project, try to work on them a little every day rather than do it all at once.
The village was always very quiet.The people lived there.
were busy working in their fields during the day ,and
went to bed early at night,tiring after a long day’s hard
work.All of them had lived in a village for all their
life and have never left for more than one day at a time.
On these days they left,they got up early in the morning.
They filled their carts with fruit and vegetables and sheeps,
and went on the market in the town beyond their valley.
They came back in the evening and with some money and perhaps a
present for their children.That was their left-hard yet
simple,but not unhappy.
During this summer vacation，I went to the country to _________
see my uncle．We haven’t seen each other for a long time
I was very glad to see that he was living happy life and
that great changes had been taken place in his home．He had
worked there for more than twenty years，and he looks very
strong．I went to work in the fields with uncle and his
workers every day．Though I was a bit tiring．I felt very happy.
That I liked most was to watch the sunrise there and
swimming in the small river．At the end of the vacation,I
had to say goodbye for my uncle and left the beautiful village
One afternoon,when I was on my way home, the sky
changed suddenly.Dark cloud were gathering. I began
to feel worrying because I didn’t have either a raincoat
or umbrella.It soon started to rain heavily
Just as I was hurrying home,I heard of someone calling
me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that
it was Jasime,a good neighbor of my,He immediately
offrerd to share his umbrella with me.We walked all
the way home.With Jasime’s help,I would have got
wet to the skin. How much thankful I was for his help!
Different people have different ideas about music.
For me,I like rock music because it’s so exciting.But
my favorite rock band,the“Foxy Ladies”,are one of
the most famous rock band in the world.I also like
the pop music.My classmate Li Lan loves dance music
because she enjoys in dancing.My best friend,Jane,
likes Jazz music and she thinks Jazz is real cool.
My brother also likes rock much,thinking them amazing.
But my mother thinks rock is boring.“I like some relaxed
music, ”she says. That’s she likes country music,I think
下面文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
I together with my parents went to the wildlife park last Sunday. There were lots of vlsitors stand before the ticket window. We waited a long tine and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated into my parents. I had hard time looking for them, and I had no luck. Wadering in the park, I felt alone without any compantons. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covering as much as 5 kilometer.