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Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet. I was then 1. _______
in a school for students from Tibet. As we were all left home 2. _______
at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We 3. _______
had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, 4. _______
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. 5. _______
At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool 6. _______
or go for a picnic. We were living in a big family. We treat 7. _______
each other as brothers and sisters. If any one of us had any 8. _______
difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out. 9. _______
It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories 10. _______
are as sweet as ever before.
Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1. _______
hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year 2. _______
more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3. _______
and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting 4. _______
your collection of stamps are easy became they are everywhere. 5. _______
Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6. _______
from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7. _______
the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you 8. _______
will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club 9. _______
which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10. _______
During the summer of 2001, I started reading books
in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new 1._______
words from these books, but I had terribly problems 2._______
memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word 3._______
many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized 4._______
I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was 5._______
a great achievement for myself. I started writing down 6._______
words from books that I read. I would come back from 7._______
school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down 8._______
new words and added it to my collection. By the end 9._______
of last year,my collection has grown to 3,000 words. 10._______
On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself 1. _______
to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip 2. _______
to London, and visit the British Museum and some 3. _______
parks. But I have spent lots my money, so I cannot 4. _______
even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. 5. _______
Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your 6. _______
stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a 7. _______
concert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have 8. _______
some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen 9. _______
to my own records, there are no need to spend money. 10. _______
All right. That' s what I' m going to do.
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _______
describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _______
it seems always difficult for me to do things well as 3. _______
them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. _______
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. _______
Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 6. _______
don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. _______
very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. _______
once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 9. _______
seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. _______
Yours,
Xiao Wei