假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and take exercise for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the Classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sit by the lake and listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m much sorry that I can’t go back home for Mother’s Day next week. This is why I have to go to an important meeting for my boss, who helps me a lot my work and life here. But I’ll find time to seeing you soon. Mom, thank you for which you have done for Tim and me. After Dad died ten year ago, you had to work in a supermarket in the daytime and in a restaurant at the night. Though you don’t have to work now, I can still remember when you came home, you always felt tiring. Tim said he will look for a job near our home. I’m glad you won’t live by myself any more in the future.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下书信。
书信中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir，
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English best. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. So I really hope to take this chance improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, that I’m particularly interested in. I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：l. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As far as I know, time is not always enough all of us. So first of all, you need to arrange your time well. You’d better to make a long-term study plan to take up his weak subjects. And an short-term plan is equal necessary, if not more important. You have to make sure that you need to do each day, each class or even each minute. At the same time, it’s quite essential to keeping healthy. So take exercise for at least one hour and sleep for no less than seven hour a day. And don’t forget to eat well. More fruit was always right for you.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They
find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing while they
are walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places
that people has never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it
not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be
passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am a high school student. A few days before, one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop the school. He said that he wanted to start his own business. I tried best to get him to change his mind, but I failed. I know it is difficult of him to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to insist that he should give it a try. The process is more important than the results. Now there is only 60 days left before that test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong . I needed your advice.