假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Miss Kate,
I learned from the newspaper that you’re looking for an English teacher for our school. I am writing to you to apply of the teaching position and I believe I am the right person you are looking for.
Firstly, allow me to introducing myself. My name is Li Hua, and I am an eighteen-year-old girl. I had just graduated from high school but taken the University Entrance Examination. I have a good command of English and I have gone to America study English for two years. However, I am a very patient person and love the children very much. I’m sure I’ll do a good job if I’m accepted.
I sincerely hope you can give me a chance. I am looked forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Today is Sunday, The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life.1.___________
At about 9:00a.m, I go to the bookstore with my friends, there2.___________
was a lot of new books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because3.___________
these books were all useful to me. At last, I chose two.4.___________
At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was5.___________
very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the6.___________
film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even7.___________
burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble8.___________
and valuable. That’s a really wonderful film, It is very worth9.___________
seeing again.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!10.____________
How many time do you spend with your parents?1.___________
Your parents are your dearer people in the world2.___________
when you are young. And they always care of you3.___________
deep. But even though many children still love their4.___________
mum and dad, families may become more close5.___________
as you get older. The end of the year is a time for6.___________
families to get together. Have you ever thought of7.___________
how you can show your parents that you love them?8.___________
Find a chance and do something for them or to have9.___________
sincere talk with them. If you can do this, your parents10.___________
will be very happy.
It is important to do with the rubbish in cities. Rubbish must be 1.____________
treated properly. Thus, it may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute 2.____________
the air and water. When people breathe the polluted air or drink polluted 3.____________
water, we may get ill. Our city has begun to pay attention to the roblem. 4.____________
As far as I know, some rubbish is sorted and sent to different factory. 5.____________
Rubbish, such as old newspapers and glass, are recycled. Some harmful 6.____________
rubbish is sent to a certain place and buried. Waste air is cleaned after it 7.____________
goes into the air. Waste water is treated before it poured into rivers. To 8.____________
protect from the environment, the government has passed laws to 9.____________
prevent people from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should do our 10.___________
best to take good care of the environment and fight against pollution.
Behind my apartment, there is used to be a dirty and 1.___________
messy comer. Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees. 2.___________
Broken bottles were left laying here and there. There was 3.___________
a damaging car in the center. The whole comer gave off an 4.___________
unpleasant smell. One year ago, we decided to turn it in a 5.___________
beautiful park. Since then, great changes have been taken place 6.___________
in that comer. All the rubbish have been cleared away. Flowers 7.___________
and young trees have planted all over. Now birds come 8.___________
here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here 9.___________
to enjoy our peaceful life. It has taken on a new look. 10.___________
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At first I was not quite willing to sit down and |
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watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just |
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checked the results because I thought that was dull |
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to watch a game in which players kicked a ball each other. |
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Therefore, my father loves football. During the |
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World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch |
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his favorite sport. Seeing his strong interest in this |
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game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down |
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to watch the game. I found the game excited, and my |
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dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football |
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is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad! |
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