短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A lady once wrote a long story and sent to a famous editor. After a few week, the story was returned to her. The lady got very angrily. She wrote to the editor, “Dear sir, how do you know why the story is not good? You didn't read it. After I sent it to you, I pasted pages 21, 22 or 23 together. This was a test to see whether I would really read the story. When it came back, the pages still pasted together. Is this the way in that you read the stories that are sent to you?” The editor writes back, “Dear madam, at breakfast when I open an egg, I don't have to eat the whole egg in order to discover that it is bad.”
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
In
a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then
suddenly she felt the street was strong shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings were leaned down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by the fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she had got over. Seeing such many goods from the
mainland of China and other countries, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11
处起）不计分。
editor,
I’m writing to tell you something about how we students use the Internet．As we all know, the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life．We often read news at home and abroad and learning foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet．Sometimes we sent e-mails to our families as well as our friends．Beside, we listen music, enjoy films and play computer games on it．We can even do shopping without leaving our homes．
However, it has its disadvantages．We waste too much time playing the electronic games, that has a bad effect on our studies．What’s worse, the bad information on the Internet do great harm to them．I hope we can make the use of the Internet proper for our studies．
Yours truly
Zhang Hua
Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time ________
watching television than they spend in school. Because so________
much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of ________
read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries________
much about the radio program young people listen to, ________
although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about ________
the effects of television commercials. On one year the _______
average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all________
planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want________
things that they don't real need.________
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并改正。
My parents and I went to the zoo on last Sunday. 1.
There were a lot of visitors stood in front of the2._______________
ticket window. We waited for a long time and buy three 3.
tickets in the Monkey Mountain World of the zoo. I was 4.
too eager to see the smart and funny animals, but I 5.
quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, 6.
I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking 7.
for him. But no luck. Wandering in the zoo, I felt8.
alone without companions. Worse still, I had no money, 9.
so I had to walk home, covered as much as 10 miles. 10.
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend ∧weekend with you．Luckily
the I wascompletely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol atam around 8 pm in Friday evening． on |
Susan,
I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.
Yours,
Zhang Ming