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I like playing football on the playground where is in the north of our school. I like them because I can play football with friends happy and we can also have matches. Although we are busy with our study, we always spared as much time as possibly to practise. As matter of fact, I begin playing football when I was only eight years old, and I have been good at it. I joined in the school team as soon as I entered senior high school. How fun it is to play football, especially on the beautiful autumn days with a number of fallen leaf on the ground.
Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a 1.
hobby which is both interested and fun.And every year 2.
more and more people start a stamp collection of your own 3.
and discover an interest which can even last lifetime.Starting 4.
your collection of stamps are easy because they are everywhere. 5.
Holidays and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 6.
from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over 7.
the world.So once you’ve started collecting seriously,you 8.
will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’Club 9.
which exist to add more stamps to your collection. 10.
Dear Bill,
Thank you for all of your kindness.I really enjoy staying at 1.
your home for one month.Would you like very much visit 2.
me in Beijing in next August?My cousin will have his 3.
first time home stay in Virginia next summer,and you can 4.
use his room!Don’t be too surprise when you see it 5.
though.He is crazy with soccer,so he has many pictures 6.
of famous soccer player on the wall.His room is very 7.
comfortable,and you will enjoy staying in it.In his room 8.
there is the TV set.It is not a big one,but it is clear and 9.
bilingual(双语的).You can watch movies and the news in 10.
English.Also,you can use my cousin’s CD player.
Dear John,
Last summer I take a parttime job in the International 1.
Camp for children.I have been told one more worker 2.
will be needed this year and I think you are fit it.How 3.
about join us?The camp is at the foot of a small hill 4.
close to a river.It is so a beautiful place!We can hear 5.
birds singing happy all around.Everybody sleeps in 6.
tents,that is very exciting.We usually work only five 7.
hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time visit the 8.
area and have a fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable 9.
experience.If you have interests in it,reply to me soon. 10.
Yours,
Li Ping
Dear Mr Smith,
Thank you very much for invite me to go and stay with 1.
you in Nanjing.It’s the most beautiful city,and I have been 2.
eager to see you again.So I’m very sorry to tell you that I can’t 3.
go this summer vacation,since I’ve already been promised 4.
to stay with my grandmother in the countryside.She has 5.
already 65 years old and miss me so much that I have no choice 6.
but do it.I’m busy preparing for my college entrance exams 7.
all these days and I feel quite sure of myself.I wish I can go, 8.
and see you and Tom at the end this year. 9.
Best wishes to both you and Tom! 10.
Yours sincerely,
Song Ping
Anne lives in a small town.She is fond of
surfing the Internet.In general speaking,she 1.
spent about an hour a day on line.To her,it is 2.
a wonderful place because you never know that 3.
it may have in store for you.Last Friday,she 4.
found an e-pal,that called himself “Future”. 5.
They promised to keep touch with each other. 6.
And she was warned against him by her parents. 7.
“What will it lead to?” she asked.“A happy ending,” 8.
Anne answered and continued typing,paid no 9.
attention to them.One month past,and a man 10.
called “Future” was arrested by the police!