假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a good friend who name is Liu Mei.She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class.Clever as she is,but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening,she told me that something happened when her parents was out.She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while she smelt something burning.She stopped look out of the window and found a cloud of smoke come out of her neighbor’s house.She called 119 immediate.Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire.Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.
短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则改正:
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Life on earth depends the sun. Day after 1. _______
day we see its light and feel its warm, but we 2. _______
do not often consider about its origin. 3. _______
Yet there are many remarkable things about the 4. _______
sun. One is their distance from the earth. Even 5. _______
if it could be made,a trip to the sun would spend a long 6. _______
time even by the fastest rocket. 7. _______
The sun is a large satellite. The planet 8. _______
earth is very small in comparison. The sun make 9. _______
us to feel hot, even at a distance of 93 million miles. 10. ______
短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则改正:
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
After I finished the school this year,I began to 1. _______
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2. _______
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning 3. _______
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4. _______
He said to me on the phone, "I hear you do very 5. _______
well in your studies. I may provide a job for you." I entered 6. _______
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7. _______
will go through the job -hunting talk today and he would8. _______
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9. _______
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model. 10. ______
短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则改正:
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Once an old man saw a bag on his way to home. 1. _______
In the bag there was a wolf. It was catching and put in 2. _______
the bag by a shepherd(牧羊人) a few minutes ago.
The wolf asked the old man to let him out. 3. _______
The old man took pity on him and opened bag. 4. _______
When the wolf got out, said to the old man, "I am very hungry. 5. _______
I want to eat you." The other old man could do nothing 6. _______
and cry for help. Just then the shepherd came and saw this. 7. _______
He beat the wolf to death by a stick. Then he said to the 8. _______
old man, "wolves want to eat men all the time. It's nature 9. _______
will never change. We should took this as a good lesson." 10. ______
短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则改正:
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Sir,
I'm glad to recommend (推荐) to you my friend Li Ming.
Li Ming was born on July 15, in 1974 in Beijing. 1. _______
He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986. 2. _______
When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, 3. _______
physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating 4. _______
from No.4 High School, he entered into Beijing 5. _______
University study physics. After four years of hard 6. _______
work there, he went to the United States for farther 7. _______
study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's 8. _______
degree in physics this year.He is now in good health
but would like to make contributions to our 9. _______
country. I should be most grateful if you would favorably consider my recommendation.
Looking forward to receive your early reply. 10. ______
Yours truly,Wang Li
短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则改正:
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
The other day my brother Tom was beginning his 1. _______
motorbike then our neighbor, Mary came out and asked 2. _______
him if he was going near the station. So he offered her a lift.
She got at the back of the motorbike and 3. _______
they drove away. Just before they reached to the station 4. _______
a policeman waved to them to stop. "Excuse me, sir," he said.
"You are not sitting on that motorbike properly."
"What's matter with the way I'm sitting?" my brother 5. _______
asked in surprise. "Not you,sir. It's a young lady," said 6. _______
the policeman. "In this country side-saddle(偏座) is not 7. _______
permitted when one ride a motorbike." Mary made an excuse 8. _______
that she was from Italy, where it isn't considering to 9. _______
break the law when people take the side-saddle.
The policeman shook head and drove away. 10. ______