假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my friend Zhang Hua and I decided go to the foreign language bookstore in our city. We were waiting for to get on a bus when we noticed a woman nearby. She had several bag and a baby with her. Both Zhang Hua or I helped her get on the bus. We carried the bags and she held her baby. On a bus she told ourselves that she wasn’t sure where to get off. That’s because we didn’t get off the bus at our stop to making sure she got to her place. When we help her get off the bus, the woman was so thankfully. And she said, “You are good kids.”
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
This morning I went to the shop to change
the coat I bought it yesterday. But the salesgirl________
treated me coldly. At first, she didn’t admit that the________
coat sold in her shop and then she said I made________
it dirty. She gave various excuse to refuse my________
request. So I got angrily and quarreled with her.________
Then the manager turned up and asked how was________
the matter. Before I told him the whole thing,________
he said sorry for me and criticized the salesgirl.________
At last, they changed another coat for us. With________
satisfaction I take the new coat home happily.________
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
People communicate in words. Do you think you can communicate without words? A smile on your face show you are happy but friendly. Tears in eyes tell the others that you are sad. When you put up your hand in class, the teacher knows you want say something. Other things should also carry messages. For example, a sign at the bus stop helps you to know which bus to carry. Signs on the door tell you if to go in or out. Have you ever seen that there are a lot of sign around you and that you receive messages from it all the time?
短文改错：（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Students go to colleges and universities to have valuable experiences and learn to live in their own. Go to colleges often means having the opportunity to meet with different peoples from different parts of the country. They learn to communicating and co-operate with each other. For most students, we guess, it is the first time that they had been away home. They are faced by many new situations and have to learn to solve them independently, making decisions on our own and dealing with various things themselves. So colleges and universities help with them grow up.
短文改错（满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to be successful，you should first of all never give up whatever happen．If you fail，you should never lose heart．In the contrary，you must build up your confidence or work even harder．You should always remember that working hard was the key to success. Besides，you should pay a great attention to your working methods．That is necessary for you to take every chance improve them．Finally，you should try to get along well with your co-workers，cared for each other and helping each other．If you follow these rule，you will certain achieve great success in the future．
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.
I am looking forward to receive your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping