假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处
加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, many people think competition is the key for success. They struggle for our own personal goals with no regard for the people around them. I believe such thinking is out of date and contemporary society, including society as a whole as well as individuals, demands that we cooperated with others. The world economy is expected to remain favor. However, the negative effects of high oil prices, competition for resources and global population is on the rise. To overcome these problem, countries must pay attention to their relationships and act it together. The fight against problems so as AIDS and terrorism requires cooperated. Our own personal success is not different. In order to succeed, we must cooperate to solve problems.
第二节．短文改错（共10小题；每小题1. 5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Welcome to our city. Now let me to introduce our city 76______
to you. Our city is a newly-built modern city. It is set up in 77______
the early 1990s, but it has been developing rapid. From 78______
here you can travel to anywhere by water, by air and 79_______
by land. Recently a new freeway is connected 80______
with Beijing has been used. The place around our city 81______
are rich in natural resources. And they have enough supplies 82______
of electricity and other forms of energy. The public order 83______
is very well. Besides, the people of our city are warm-hearted 84_______
and we like to make friends by people all over the world. 85______
That’s all. Thank you.
第Ⅱ卷（满分 35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分；满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词;
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Robert Burns, a famous Scottish poet, was born in the poor 76.
farmer’s family. Although he only received two or a half years’ 77.
schooling, but he managed to read a large number of poems and 78.
novels in his spare time. His first collection of poems were 79.
completed in 1786. Once publishing, it attracted the attention of 80.
readers and poets because its simple style. And soon Burns’ 81.
work stood out among the other Scottish poems at that time. 82.
Despite his short life, he wrote many poems and contributed 83.
great to the development of English literature. His poem, 84.
A Red, Red Rose, had been translated into many languages. 85.
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一题做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划对号：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
| On a snowy winter night. a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse, the bus ran out of gas and it is very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearly saw what had happened. He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus. He took them to  his homebut offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All o  f them were thankfully for his kind help. |
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Einstein was an ordinary and simply man in my 76．
eye, I once gave him a toy, a bird that stood on the edge 77．
of a howl of the water and again and again put its head 78．
from the water. Einstein watched it in delight, trying to 79．
find out its mystery, but be couldn’t. Text next morning, 80．
he began his long exploration. So he suddenly stopped, 81．
realizing a problem in it. “No, I guess that’s not it.” He tries 82．
many different ways to explain it for days until he suggested 83．
we take the toy apart to see what it worked. However, 84．
he against my suggestion. He never worked it out. 85．
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题，共40分）
注意事项：用黑色字迹的签字笔或钢笔将答案写在答题纸上，不能答在试题卷上。
第三部分：写作（共二节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was frightening on my first day of classes at an American university．It was my first time to sit with so many Americans in a classroom．Unlike many other classmate, I sat quietly by myself．My teacher spoke fast and I had a hard time understanding him．English, without a doubt, is the hardest thing I experienced so far．Though I'm a Chinese student, communicate fluently with Americans can be really difficultly．Therefore, I have to struggle to understand that is being said in class．Reading and writing is equally as important as listening and speaking．When my classes started to get busy, the readings got longer．The papers also got harder, and that's when real disaster struck．