假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”
写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mike called his wife to tell him that he had got two film tickets. He asked her to go and meet him outside the theatre. Mike’s wife is very glad because they hadn’t seen a film for quite long time. She met her husband in the entrance to the cinema. Mike took out his wallet to get the ticket, so they were not there. He then tried his pockets, but the tickets were not there, too. Mike looked very worrying. “What’s the matter?” asked his wife. “Well,” Mike explained, “I remember that I did with them. I put them on the desk and forgot to pick them up before leaving for the office!”
第Ⅱ卷(非选择题，共计35分)
五、改错题（总计10小题，每小题1分）
此题要求改正所给的短文中的错误，如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在下方写出该加的词。
错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，并在横线下写出改正后的词。
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quiet satisfied.
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My husband and I had decided to buy a new house, and I
made the appointment to see our bank manager. I’ve never
met 76．
him ago and was a little nervous. I drove into town and 77．
was luck enough to find a parking space outside the bank. I was 78．
just starting into the space while another car drove into it. I was very 79．
angry. I opened my window and shouted the other driver. He 80．
ignored me and walked away. It spent me 20 minutes to find 81．
another space. As soon as I had parked the car. I rushed into 82．
the bank. I was 10 minutes later for my appointment. I went to 83．
the manager office, knocked and walked in. The manager was sitting 84．
behind his desk. It was the man who has taken my parking space. 85．
第二节短文改错(共10小题，每小题1．5分，满分l5分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写上该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
“Practice makes perfect” was an old saying. It tells us that it 76.____________
does not any matter if we are slow at doing something. As 77. ___________
long as we keep on trying and practice, we’ll do a good job 78. ___________
in the end. The saying is especial useful in English study. 79. ___________
Since a stu
dent is poor at speaking, he should grasp every 80. ___________
chance to open mouth and speak English. His oral English 81. ___________
may be excellent one day due to his hard works. Not only is 82. ___________
the saying useful in English study, it is also helpful in our83. ___________
daily life. To an extent, it is no short cut in doing everything 84. ___________
since key to success lies in “Practice makes perfect”. 85. ___________
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分，满分l0分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写上该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
“Practice makes perfect” was an old saying. It tells us that it 76.
does not any matter if we are slow at doing something. As 77.
long as we keep on trying and practice, we’ll do a good job78.
in the end. The saying is especial useful in English study. 79.
Since a student is poor at speaking, he should grasp every 80.
chance to open mouth and speak English. His oral English 81.
may be excellent one day due to his hard works. Not only is 82.
the saying useful in English study, it is also helpful in our 83.
daily life. To an extent, it is no short cut in doing everything 84.
since key to success lies in “Practice makes perfect”. 85.