假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Most children in the United Kingdom have access for computers in their classrooms. Since the computers are strict for education purposes, they do not contain any games. Books remains the greatest source of knowledge. And we have to move with the times. For teaching English and other languages, computers are excellent, because many of the software using for writing highlight wrongly spelt words or incorrectly structured sentences. This is helps children to learn a language faster and much easily. In this sense, a computer is better than the tradition blackboard. I think, since the use of computers has to controlled, a blend (混合) of the computer and the blackboard would be a best way to teach children.
Today I showed some foreign friends in our city. We started 1.
off by a car from the Friendship Hotel at 8 o’clock am. We first went 2.
to the Zhongshan Park. We were both struck by its beautiful flowers 3.
there. Then, we visited the city museum. We saw plenty of valuable 4.
things, from them we learned more about the city. After that we 5.
devote to the Jinshan Temple. There is a beautiful place of interest in6.
our city, but from there we enjoyed the wonderful scenery of the 7.
sea.We had a delicious lunch at the Seafood Restaurant and come 8.
back at 1:20 pm. All the foreign friends were pleased my arrangement. 9.
I was happy that we do have a wonderful time today.10.
Once upon a time there was a farmer worked hard in the fields 1.
every day. One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a 2.
bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lie by the trump. He picked it 3.
up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to him,“Since it 4.
is so easy get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all day 5.
long?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreamed for 6.
more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolish and returned 7.
to his fields, he found that all his crops are dead. This story tells that 8.
we should wait for unexpected gains by trusting to chance and luck. 9.
Or, we should not hope to get reward without hard work. 10.
Which we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important 1.
for us to form into healthy eating habits. However, bad habits are still very 2.
common among we students. Some of us often go to school without 3.
breakfast .Some like to have snacks; some others are particular with food; 4.
and still some eat or drink too many. All these bad habits will be bad for our health
5.
To keep fit, we should have various health diets, which generally 6.
include proper amount of fish, meat, vegetable, fruit as well as main food. 7.
Beside, we had better have meal regularly.8.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up 9.
a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy study better. 10.
Choose what to eat is no longer as easy as it once was. Our eating habits 1.
have changed , as have our way of life. And the fuel we need for our2.
body is also different. Tradition diets often have too much fat and too3.
much calories for the 21st-century person. If we want to keep up with the4.
high pace of modern life, we had better to learn to make the right choices5.
about what and how we eat. Because we have so much to choose, many 6.
companies offer advice about what we should eat. It’s good if we spend our 7.
time and money in buying food and keep a balanced diet. Instead of eating 8.
expensive diet or going on unhealthy diets, we can simply try to eat little 9.
sugar and take more exercise. I hope that everyone keeps a good health. 10.
短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
Dear Mary,
I am sorry that you had a disagreement with your father. Personal, 76. ________
I think this is important to follow your interests and your abilities, 77. ________
but it sounds as though you have plenty of both of these already. 78. ________
Speak to your father and tell him what you are doing well in the79. ________
subject of your choice. Furthermore, remind him that many men80. ________
have chosen to work in fields that are not used to accept women. 81. ________
Ask your father to speak to your teachers and find out how well 82. ________
you are at your chosen subject. Trust you. Trust your own83. ________
thinking and your choice. Hopefully, your father will respect84. ________
your choice and let you to do what you want to. 85. ________
Best wishes.
Amy