假定英语课上老师要同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests．I was feeling very nervous．I had not studied at all the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test．
I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions．I did not want to fail the exam． Then , I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer．The teacher wasn’t looking at me ,but I copied something．Suddenly, I felt a hand in my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating．I don’t know what to say．Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance．
第二节改错（10 分）
Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of her students are from other
part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because
the moment
is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing.
第II卷（非选择题，满分35分）
注意事项：
用钢笔或圆珠笔直接写在答题纸上。
答卷前将密封线内的项目填写清楚。
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At 7:30 on the morning, we gathered at the school gate and set off on a large bus. An hour later, we arrive at the Forest Park. Getting off, we started our journey at once.
First, we climbed the green hills and on the way tried their luck to hunt for hidden treasure. Next, we toured around the lake in the comfortable boat. The beautiful scenery was really a feast for the eye. Then at noon time, we landed and settled at an open area, which we enjoyed a wonderful picnic. After eating, we sang and danced happy and played some interesting games. The day passed quickly. Finally it was time for us to return back. So at 3:00 pm, we cleaned the ground, made our way to the parking lot, getting on the bus and left.
It was really an exciting trip since we had long busy with our school work.
第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
此题要求改正短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾（P）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线（\）划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前（后）词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
During the summer of 2001, I started reading books
in English, mostly stories. I would learn a lot of new 76.______
words from these books,but I had terribly problems 77.______
memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word 78.______
many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized 79.______
I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was 80.______
a great achievement for myself. I started writing down 81.______
words from books that I read. I would come back from 82.______
school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down 83.______
new words and added it to my collection. By the end 84.______
of last year，my collection has grown to 3 000 words. 85.______
第II卷（非选择题，共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I often quarrel about my mother over if I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard work. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Therefore, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.