假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confident that makes people successfully.
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第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Walter’s goal in life was become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high school first, so he put his heart into his study – in particular, biology, chemistry, and maths. Because he worked hard at these subjects, Walter became good at it. However, Walter forgot that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result, Walter fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate like pawned. Walter learned a good lesson.
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改错（满分10分，每题1分）
Most families in China hoped their single children will 76. _______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77. _______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78. _______
homework that they hardly have any spare time have sports. 79. _______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80. _______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81. _______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82. _______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83. _______
Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84. _______
government are carrying out a plan to solve the education problems. 85. _______
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第II卷（非选择题，共50分）
第三部分写作（共两节，满分50分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
The day after Thanksgiving is the start the holiday shopping 66. __________
season. One place where is very busy today is a large shopping 67. __________
mall in Bloomington of the USA. In fact, it is one of the 68. _________
largest shopping and entertainment center in the world. 69. __________
In this mall, there are more than five hundreds stores, including four 70. ________
large department stores. It has sixty eaten places and a big aquarium. 71. _______
You can walk along it and so watch sharks eat or see a reef up close. 72. ________
The mall also has much museums, theaters, and a place where 73. ________
people can get married. Mall spokesman Daniel saying that 74. ________
millions of people visits the mall every year from all over the world. 75. _________
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第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
After read your advertisement, I want to offer 76．_________
myself for the position. I’m twenty years old, 77．_________
male, 1.78metres tall, strong and health. I will 78．_________
graduate Nanjing University this year. I have been 79．_________
learning English for ten years. My spoken
English is very much good and I can write 80．_________
good article. I have won several prizes in 81．_________
English contests. I have made a great deal of 82．_________
inventions, most of them have been put into practice. 83．_________
but I can use the computer skillfully. If I can 84．_________
get the job, I’ll try my best do it well. Thank 85．_________
you for your kindness.
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第二节：短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾(∨)；如有错误(每一行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear fellow students,
Our school is aimed to build a “harmonious campus” .
As a high school students, we should behave ourselves. But 76.
some students are badly behaved. They threw rubbish about 77.
and listen MP3 or sleep in class. A few boys even smoke and copy 78.
other students homework. I think it has a bad effect on their health as 79.
good as their study. A “harmonious campus” should have civilized 80.
students. So we should be strict on ourselves. Of course, study is the 81.
first. But we should study hardly. In order to build a harmonious 82.
study atmosphere, they must develop good habits. If everyone 83.
makes a contribution to build our campus, I’m sure84.
our school will become beautiful and harmonious. 85.
Yours,
Li Qiang