该短文共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加-优题课

在下面的短文中只有10处错误，请找出，多出的（从第11处起）不给分。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余词用（﹨）划掉
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词
Half a year before I went abroad for further study.I received a lot of present. All were wrapped in color paper.Among them were two presents which were really interestedme. My sister buy me a book with color pictures aboutbody language and with words about customs ofdifferent countries in them. My brother gave me a note, whichread, “My present has put in your bedroom.” While Ihurried into my bedroom, I found a box in it. Openthe box, I got a pocket computer. I was very glad. I understood these two presents would help me using bodylanguage to communicate people and improve my English.

请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每一行只有一个错误，按下列情况改下。
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of
the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.
After that, you always gave me specially attention and
inspired me to join in activity. As a result, I gradually
got to know other campers. Because the help you gave me
that summer, my .life changed. I gain so much confidence that
I went back to school as new person. My grades improved. I
became active but made new friends. Yesterday, I got a letter
that was said I was admitted to a college. I am proud of it. I just
want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.
Yours
Bob

假定英语课上老师要求同桌交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：每处错误及修改均仅限一次;只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。
One day I had happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in
English . I tried to chat with any of them . To my surprise , I found the oral English of some
junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice but they told me practise
more on QQ. So every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ.
Day by day I learned many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I
could even communicate with some college students free.

此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在答题
卡该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，
并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该
加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Time seemed limited for us Senior Three students．________
However, more and more students are studying from early_________
morning till lately afternoon, even during the ten-minute_________
break．In my opinion, Take a break between classes is________
not necessary．Otherwise, we will feel tired both physically_________
and mentally．During the break, we should do something________
to get rid of tiredness．What they need is to have a real rest,________
instead getting more tired．My break is always pleasing．________
Sometimes I take some simple exercise．Sometimes I have free_________
chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside．While the________
next class begins, I feel fresh again.

短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
By mid-day the sun was very strong, Jim was so tired
to walk. There was not any trees near the road, so he rested
under a big rock. After drinking some water, he took his
shirt, lying down on the ground and fell asleep at once.
He was very tired that he didn’t wake up until the evening.________________
He was just about to jump when it felt something moving________________
near his feet. He looked down but saw a long black snake.________________
Jim was so frightening that he didn’t dare to move. The ________________
snake began to crawl across his legs. It crawled on and________________
on until it was disappeared under the rocks, Jim jumped ________________
to his feet, picked up his shirt and ran down the road.