假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处。
Yesterday my family went to Nanchang because of my grandmother had a birthday.This year he is seventy years old.
In the morning we went there by car and then we went to the photo studio. There we all put down the clothes like the Tang Dynasty’s and take a family picture.
At noon, we entered a restaurant, and we each ordered the long life noodles and another foods that must be prepare. Then I began to congratulate my grandmother on her birthday. I wished my grandmother good healthy and long life. After our lunch, we came back.
How a wonderful day we had!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I’d like to share one of my unforgettable experience with everyone present. My parents had arranged a party for my 18th birthday at a hotel. It was raining heavy outside, so we had to stay inside all night. The room was packed with guests dancing together while we saw smoke. All begin to panic because there were so many of us that we couldn’t get out quickly. Thankfully, we managed open a window and get out of the burning building. To my sorrow, some of them had to go to hospital because of breathing problems and the room which the party took place was completely destroyed. Afterwards, I was told that a building had been struck by lightning and the firefighters had spent about 3 hours putting off the fire.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk about that you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay closely to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and try to remain quietly and calm. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. Whether it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that someone is missing or hurt, tell your teacher immediate.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mr Johnson,
I’m writing to tell you that I had a safety journey back to Beijing. Thanks to your kindness, I had a wonderfully time in Australia. It is my first time to go abroad and I was naturally a bit nervous when I was arrived. When I saw you at an airport, I knew from your warm smile that something would be all right. With your help, I visited so many places of interests in Australia, where impressed me a lot. I hope some day you will go to visit Beijing and I will act like a guide to show you around the city.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A)，写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，写出改正后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Bill worked in big office, and he usually went to the barber's during working hours to have his hair cut. This against the rules： office workers had to have his hair cut in their own time. While Bill was at the barber's on one day, the manager of the office entered in to have his own hair cut. Bill saw him and managed to hide his face. But the manager sat besides him, and soon recognized him. "Hello, Bill," said the manager, "I know you are having your haircut. ""Yes, sir, I do, said Bill. "You see, sir, it grows in office time. " "Not all of it，" said the manager at once. "Some grow in your own time. " "Yes, sir, that's quite true," answered Bill polite, "but I'm not having it all cut off. "
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A)，写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，写出改正后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Bill worked in big office, and he usually went to the barber's during working hours to have his hair cut. This against the rules： office workers had to have his hair cut in their own time. While Bill was at the barber's on one day, the manager of the office entered in to have his own hair cut. Bill saw him and managed to hide his face. But the manager sat besides him, and soon recognized him. "Hello, Bill," said the manager, "I know you are having your haircut. ""Yes, sir, I do, said Bill. "You see, sir, it grows in office time. " "Not all of it，" said the manager at once. "Some grow in your own time. " "Yes, sir, that's quite true," answered Bill polite, "but I'm not having it all cut off. "