假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的-优题课

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏写符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Ken,

1．	I am very exciting to learn that you're coming to

2．	Beijing for the Olympic. Both my parent miss you a

3．	lot. So do our friend, Cathy, August is the best time

4．	of the year to visit Beijing, because of there is only

5．	a few rain and the weather is neither too hot nor too

6．	cold. There are so many places I want to take you to

7．	after I finish my work like a volunteer. When you come,

8．	you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers

9．	far away from the National Stadium, also known as

10．	the "Bird's Nest", where opening ceremony will be held. Best regards, Janet

Last Sunday morning when I got up, to me great surprise, 1.___________
I found that we had a big snowfall. I was very excited because 2.___________
it was a long time that I had ever seen such a heavy snowfall. 3.___________
So I decided to call my friends to go out to play snow together. 4.___________
We made up some snowmen and rolled some snowballs 5.___________
and we enjoyed the fun of playing fighting games. Just then 6.___________
we noticed that the buses and cars move very slowly 7.___________
because the heavy snow. So we went to clean the snow so as to 8.___________
help the traffic go safely. After the all morning’s hard work, 9.___________
we cleaned the snows on the road, and we went home happily. 10.___________

One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital 1.____________
to have him examined. When he was given the test report, 2.____________
he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying?” He immediately 3.____________
was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home, 4.____________
taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe 5.____________
a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and 6.____________
went to the hospital to have more examination. To his 7.____________
great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t 8.____________
have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful. 9.____________
Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly. 10.___________

Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning 1.____________
Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force 2.____________
in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years 3.____________
training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on 4.____________
October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited 5.____________
the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day, 6.____________
making China the third country successfully sending a person 7.____________
into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA. 8.____________
Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip 9.____________
to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and 10.___________
showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.

I like travel very much. I had been to most 1.___________
of the interested places in Britain already and I just 2.___________
don’t want other cold English summer. So I’ll go 3.___________
abroad for change this year. Where I’d like4.___________
to is France, Spain, or Italy. Though going abroad 5.___________
has the trouble of changing money abroad. But6.___________
when I just think of the sun I’d enjoy for, the new 7.___________
places I’d see, the people I’d meet, I get excited. 8.___________
In fact, which I’d really like to do is to practice my 9.___________
French and Spanish. It would do me a lot at work . 10.___________