假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间相互交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Abby，
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundreds and twenty students took exams but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel lonely. They couldn't imagine a girl so young living alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with us. Why can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?
Best Wishes
Jane
请同学们严格按照题目给出的格式改错，否则不得分。如无错误；在该行右边横线上划
一个（√）；若该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右横线上写出该词，并
也用斜线划掉，该行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在该行右边横线上写出该加
的词；若该行错一个词；在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The winter holiday is coming, which makes me very exciting．
I have been looking forward to relax myself and I'd like
to go fishing, climb high mountain and ride my bicycle．
I think I can play football or play the chess with my father
as well．What wonderful time 1 will have during the winter
holiday! But my father has differently opinions．He doesn't
want me to go out．He's afraid that I'll be knocked on by
a truck, fall into rivers, fell off a tree or fight with others．
What's worse, he's afraid I will get lost．1 hate being treated
like a bird kept in a cage．I need freedom but I wii! try to
persuade my father．
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右
边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Ever since the first computer was built, each new computer
has been smaller, faster, and more powerfully. Most modern
desktop computer can perform operations that only
supercomputers could do in past. The trend will no doubt
continuing, but just how small and fast can computers get?
Wi
ll we get computers that is so small that they “disappear”
which is, will they become so small that we will wear them
inside their body? I think it’s possible that future PCs will
be made of anything other than plastic and glass. The
computer will no longer be a thing in your ho
use, but
instead of something very small that you can bring
with you wherever you go.
第二节书法展示（满分5分）
请抄写下面的文章，注意本题是按照书法的好坏评分的，格式要求与原文一致。
建议：先在草稿纸上练习，找找手感，再答卷。
My Hometown
Welcome to my hometown which is located on the Bohai Bay．It is very beautiful! Living here makes you feel quite good．Miles of beaches stretch along the coast．You can lie on the beach, bathing in the sun and enjoying the fresh air．The blue sky and beautiful scenery here will make you relaxed and excited.
People here are very friendly and considerate．They are ready to offer help to people from the country and abroad．There are plenty of tidy hotels and inns for visitors to stay in．Most importantly, you can enjoy all kinds of tasty special foods．I am sure you will have a good time here．
（请在答题卡的指定位置作答）
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节；满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Julia,
You said in your letter that you are always trying to improve 76．
your English, and your English teacher didn’t appear to appreciate 77．
your efforts．So you felt disappointing and lost the desire to learn 78．
English．You know teachers are very busy and maybe your teacher 79．
is struggled to provide personal attention for all the students 80．
in their class．In my opinion, it is a fact of life that sometimes 81．
people’s hard work went unnoticed．Though it is nice to receive 82．
encouragement and support, parts of growing up is learning to be 83．
motivated and study independently．So keep on to working hard 84．
at your English because you stop, you are sure to fail． 85．
Yours,
Li Hua
短文改错（满分10分
All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect．” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found difficult to control my body．I just sank into the water．I feel very frightened．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised．A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim．How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before．