假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间相互交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一个横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundreds and twenty students took exams but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel lonely. They couldn't imagine a girl so young living alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with us. Why can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?
Best Wishes
Jane
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误,请找出,并按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词:把多余的词
注意:请在答题卡上作答。
The Story about Growth is my favorite American
TV play because it is very interested. The play76.
tells humorous stories that happen in the Green’s 77.
family. With such stories it make people think78.
about life, but therefore attracts the audience. It is 79.
also a window which we can learn about American80.
society. And there were many meaningful things that 81.
are worth think of, such as the relationship between 82.
parents and children in a lot of American family. It 83.
is quite different from those in China. The play is 84.
very popular. We’d better not to miss the chance85.
to enjoy it.
Dear Peter,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 86. ________
party on Sunday. I'd like very much come but 87. ________
I had an examination on Monday morning. It is 88. ________
a very important exam but I can't afford to 89. ________
fail it. I'll spend all the whole weekend reading 90. ________
and prepare for it. So I'm really sorry that91. ________
I won't be able to come in this time. Hope you 92. ________
can understand. I'll take this chance to wish93. ________
you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy94. ________
birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! 95. ________
Yours,
Li Ming
I used to love science class—all of them— 86. _______
biology, chemistry, geography, physics.I think I 87. _______
liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 88. _______
understand what the world works. For example, when 89. _______
I was a child, the rain was a mystery(奥秘).In one 90. _______
class, I learned it rained. I think science classes 91. _______
clear up mysteries. But then there is always more 92. _______
mysteries look into. What was my least favourite class? 93. _______
That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, 94. _______
nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 95. _______
saw how I could use it in my daily life.
Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 76._________
sisters—in any other words, I am an only child. My parents 77._________
love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure 78._________
that I get a good education. They did not want me to do 79._________
any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to 80._________
my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We 81._________
may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 82._________
not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 83._________
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they 84._________
really understand their own daughter? What things are in 85._________
other homes, I wonder.
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.
He did not want share things with other people. For 76. _______
example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 77. _______
in a secret place where I couldn't find. Then he 78. _______
ate it all, by himself. He never helped other. 79. _______
He said he is busy. That is, a game of 80. _______
tennis making him very busy. He did not care 81. _______
if something he did made people angry. For82. _______
instance, on one night he played strong and 83. _______
loudly music till four o'clock in the morning. But 84. _______
he is difference now. He often helps grandma with 85. _______
housework, helps mom with cooking and helps
his classmates with their lessons.