假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Read English newspapers is my favorite activity. When I entered into high school, I began to enjoy doing such work. With the teachers' help, I realize that reading English articles are of great important. It is a good way to improve my English. I have learned more new words and expression by doing so. I also get many information, including news about China and the world outside. It opens my eyes widely. Which I love most is the section about TV programs in the coming week. I dislike reading long articles there are many new word. I will work hard to keep on as if it is a particularly hard task for me.
Behind my apartment, there is used to be a dirty and 1.___________
messy comer. Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees. 2.___________
Broken bottles were left laying here and there. There was 3.___________
a damaging car in the center. The whole comer gave off an 4.___________
unpleasant smell. One year ago, we decided to turn it in a 5.___________
beautiful park. Since then, great changes have been taken place 6.___________
in that comer. All the rubbish have been cleared away. Flowers 7.___________
and young trees have planted all over. Now birds come 8.___________
here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here 9.___________
to enjoy our peaceful life. It has taken on a new look. 10.___________
短文改错(共10 小题;每小题0.5分,满分5分)
At first I was not quite willing to sit down and |
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watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just |
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checked the results because I thought that was dull |
72. |
to watch a game in which players kicked a ball each other. |
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Therefore, my father loves football. During the |
74. |
World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch |
75. |
his favorite sport. Seeing his strong interest in this |
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game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down |
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to watch the game. I found the game excited, and my |
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dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football |
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is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad! |
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The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is where people1.___________
go to practise their speaking English. Every Sunday afternoon2.___________
they gather around, talk to each other in English. Among3.___________
they are students, teachers, doctors, and so on. I first went to an4.___________
English Corner when I was in Junior Grade Two. I went there on5.___________
every Sunday and chat with some people in English. In the6.___________
past three years I had never been absent. I’m sure I’ve made7.___________
some progresses in my listening and speaking. And I have8.___________
made many friends there. The English Comer is really good9.___________
place. I hope that more friends will join in us.10.___________
I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is 1.___________
my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a2.___________
bike. Ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. I3.___________
use my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warm4.___________
and dry. It can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold and5.___________
rain is pouring down. It can also be very danger. Of course6.___________
I will be very careful on my bike. In facts, accidents are not7.___________
the only problem. One day I went to school and come back8.___________
to find his front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to9.___________
the repairer’s shop. Now I have two strong locks.10.___________
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I've really got to do something to lose weight because
I'm getting much too fat. I wasn't worried about it until I go
1._________
to see the doctor. He told me that I'd probably had a heart
2._________
attack while I started eating less. When you're on a diet you
3._________
have to stop eat too much even though you are always hungry.
4._________
They may be very hard to do and you certainly need a lot
5._________
of will-power to succeed. So I will stay on a health farm for a
6._________
month I won't be able to eat much and so I'li have to stick
7._________
to my diet. I'll also do plenty of exercise, which won't give
8._________
me any harm too. Both the diet and the exercise will
9._________
help me to lose weight and feel more better.
10._________