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Opinions are divided about if we should buy products promoted by stars. Some students say that they prefer to buy products promoted by stars because of most of the stars care about the quality of the product they are going to advertise.Besides, buying those products is a way to support the stars they like. However, other think what some stars really care is money but not the quality of the product when they make a advertisement.In addition, the product that a star advertises is not necessary suitable for everyone. To my opinion, we should be cool and sensible while chosen a product. The main aspect we are supposed consider /s not the advertisement or the star and the quality of the product and its real usefulness in our daily life.
When he was senior 3 student in a high school, Li Hua studied 1.
very hard so as to go to a famous university. He often stays up late2.
in the night. Finally he passed the College Entrance Examination 3.
and was admitted to a key university. And after he went to university,4.
he became very lazy. He wasted time in going to the cinema, played 5.
cards, making friends and doing things that had something to do with 6.
his studies. He often got up late. At many times, he was still in 7.
bed while others were having his lessons in the classroom at ten in 8.
the morning . Int the end of the first term he failed in all exams. As a 9.
result, he had to give up his schooling and leave the university. 10.
One day after school, on the way to home, Xiao Ming found a 1.
water pipe in the street. He turned off a tap and splashed water 2.
here and there. At this moment , Xiao Gang happened to be 3.
passing by. Xiao Ming splashed him with water and make him 4.
all wet. Xiao Ming ran away with turning off the tap.5.
When Xiao Gang saw this, she went over and turned off the water. 6.
He was angry because he thought water shouldn’t wasted. 7.
Then he went home and wrote a notice where read “ save water” 8.
He put them up on the wall near the tap. After some time, Xiao Ming9.
went back and saw the notice. He felt sorry at what he had done. 10.
Today I showed some foreign friends in our city. We started 1.
off by a car from the Friendship Hotel at 8 o’clock am. We first went 2.
to the Zhongshan Park. We were both struck by its beautiful flowers 3.
there. Then, we visited the city museum. We saw plenty of valuable 4.
things, from them we learned more about the city. After that we 5.
devote to the Jinshan Temple. There is a beautiful place of interest in6.
our city, but from there we enjoyed the wonderful scenery of the 7.
sea.We had a delicious lunch at the Seafood Restaurant and come 8.
back at 1:20 pm. All the foreign friends were pleased my arrangement. 9.
I was happy that we do have a wonderful time today.10.
Once upon a time there was a farmer worked hard in the fields 1.
every day. One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a 2.
bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lie by the trump. He picked it 3.
up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to him,“Since it 4.
is so easy get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all day 5.
long?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreamed for 6.
more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolish and returned 7.
to his fields, he found that all his crops are dead. This story tells that 8.
we should wait for unexpected gains by trusting to chance and luck. 9.
Or, we should not hope to get reward without hard work. 10.
Which we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important 1.
for us to form into healthy eating habits. However, bad habits are still very 2.
common among we students. Some of us often go to school without 3.
breakfast .Some like to have snacks; some others are particular with food; 4.
and still some eat or drink too many. All these bad habits will be bad for our health
5.
To keep fit, we should have various health diets, which generally 6.
include proper amount of fish, meat, vegetable, fruit as well as main food. 7.
Beside, we had better have meal regularly.8.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up 9.
a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy study better. 10.