假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning everyone, since two managers wanted in the E-reading room, I’m speaking to
recommend me to you for the job.
I am from Class 8, Senior 2. I think I am fit for the job. To begin with, I can operate on a
computer skillful. Secondly, being a warm-hearted person, I enjoy do some voluntary work for
other. Lastly, I have good communication skills. I believe I can provides what the students need.
However, I firmly believe I am a ideal person for the job.
I hoped I will have the honor. Thank you for your consideration.
四．短文改错
This is a story told by my father: When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in th world but could make the most delicious dishes. Once, I just couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake his head, she said, “It’s not a good time to do that, dear.” I apologize and controlled me at the best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词；把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Unlike many other places, our hometown is also facing76._____
the problem of pollution. Unfortunately, people here have77._____
realized the importance of protection the natural environment.78._____
Factories have been taken measures to stop pouring polluted79._____
water into the rivers. The citizens not longer put waste, such80._____
as rubbish or human waste into the rivers. Every year, 81._____
a great number trees are planted. As a result, 82._____
the water in the rivers are becoming cleaner and cleaner. 83._____
The hills around the city were covered with green trees 84._____
and the air here is much more fresher than before.85._____
第二卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Carlos was born in Manila in 1950, at the age of two 76．_________________
week he was taken by his father, a musician, to the United 77．_________________
States by the sea. He spent his first ten years in the American 78．_________________
Southland that he attended school. Between the ages of 10 and 18, 79．_________________
he travelled in the Southern and Western Atlantic areas, living in 80．_________________
Florida and had graduated from his school in 1968. Early in his life 81．_________________
he had a great interested in music instruments and in 1965, he 82．_________________
learned to play the piano and quick became an expert on it. 83．_________________
Since he graduation from Florida State University in 1973. 84．_________________
he has been a famous pianist. He is not marry, saying that 85．_________________
his music school comes first.
第Ⅱ卷（共45分）
第四部分：书面表达（共两节，满分45分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear editor,
I am a high school student. A few days before, 76_______
one of my very good friend told me that he was going77_______
to stop the school. He said that he wanted to start his 78_______
own business. I tried best to get him to change his mind, 79_______
but I failed.
I know it is difficult of him to change his mind.80_______
He is not doing so good in his studies, yet I want to 81_______
insist that I give it a try. The process is more 82_______
important than the results. Now there are only 60 days 83_______
left before that test. I am not sure that his decision is 84_______
right or wrong . I needed your advice. 85_______
第II卷非选择题（共35分）
第四部分: 写作(共两节, 满分35分)
第一节：短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stand in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for them, and I had no luck. Wandering in the park，I felt alone without any companions. Worse still，I had no money, so I had to walk to home, covering as much as 5 kilometer.