假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Smile is a magic language that everyone can easily understand whenever he or she comes from. Smile is as the golden sunshine that brings warmth to people and makes him happy. Smile is shortest distance between people and it is a good way to show off friendliness to others. More important, smile conveyed a kind of positive energy to people. When you are happy, smile brightens your face. When you feel frustrating, you should also smile to cheer yourself up. Smile can give you confidences and make you strong. Smiling at the world and the world will smile back!
VII.短文改错（共10题，每小题1分，满分10分）
My dentist had just pulled out of my teeth and had told me to rest for a while. I tried to say anything , my mouth was full of cotton wool. He knew I collected match boxes and asked me that my collection was growing. He then asked me about my brother and whether I like my the new job in London. I either nodded or made strange noises in answer for the questions. Meanwhile,my tongue was search out the hole where the tooth had once been. Suddenly I felt very worriedly, but still could not say anything. When the dentist at last removed the cotton wool into my mouth, I was able to tell him that he had pulled out the wrong teeth.
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节：短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Li Hua,
It's time to recall those beautiful days when we 76.
spend together. You are the very person who gives 77.
me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerable 78.
person who knows exactly that I need. 79.
Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly 80.
fell ill, it was you carried me on your back to a nearby 81.
hospital. You took well care of me while I was having 82.
a injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. 83.
Without your help, I would failed in the exam.84.
I still have thousand of blessings for you. May all 85．
your dreams come true!
Yours,
Jane
第Ⅱ卷（共35分）
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10分，每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一个行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画—个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错误的不要改。
Last week, when I was taking train in Manchester, I saw a76._______
scene it astonished me. On the platform I noticed a womanin77.__ _
worn clothes walking slowly. Suddenly, he fell totheground. 78._______
There I see other people just keep walking asif 79._______
something happened. For a moment the woman’s eyes were 80._______
full of hopelessness. Then she struggled to her foot and got on 81._______
a train. I just wondered why others didn’t try to help with this 82._______
woman. Later I talked about this event to my friend, wholooked 83._______
at me and said, “What else did you do at that time? J
ust looking
?” 84._______
I looked at him in silence. I realized I was just so selfish as others85._______
on the scene, too.
第二卷（共35分）
注意事项：第二卷共2页，用黑色碳素笔将答案答在答题卡上，答在试卷上的答案无效。
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上画一个钩（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mr. and Mrs. Jones came out of the cinema, getting 76. __________
into their car and began driving their home. It was 77. __________
quite darkness. Then Mrs. Jones said. “Look, Bill. 78. __________
A woman’s running along street very fast, and 79. __________
a man’s running after him. Can you see them?” 80. __________
Mr. Jones said, “Yes, I can.” He drives slowly close to 81. __________
the woman and asked to her, “Can we help you?” 82. __________
“No, thank you,” the woman said, but she did not stop 83. __________
run. “My husband and I always run home after the 84. __________
cinema, and the last one wash the dishes at home.” 85. __________
第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处如一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Charlie Lee, aged fifteen, and his sister Roseanne,
earn their pocket money by washing his father’s car, 76. ________
watering the plants, cleaning the balcony, and do 77. ________
odd (临时的) jobs around a house. Their parents prefer giving 78. ________
them money for doing jobs to buying them present. 79. ________
Charlie and Roseanne usually receives about $25 for 80. ________
each job. They often bargain their father over the pay 81. ________
and the job to be done. Mrs. Lee said, “We were 82. ________
teaching them that the money doesn’t come out of 83. ________
nowhere. It means more to them if they feel that they’ve 84. ________
earned it but they better understand the value of things. 85. ________