假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain on April 10. The moment we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirit. We supported each other to pass the rocky areas on the course of the climb. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, there we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was extremely beautiful This event was very benefit, for not only we take a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned what to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
短文改错（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
| On the first day when I went to work in a very famous |
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| restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few |
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| people come for dinner. So I was “invited” to have a meal in |
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| the restaurant. Before ordering two French dishes and some |
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| food, I began to look frequently my watch timing the serving |
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| of the meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was |
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| anything wrong there. I wrote down the problems secret. My meal |
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| was not served yet. I looked at my watch: 32 minute had |
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| passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main |
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| reason why the business was poor. Then I write a report about my findings and presented it to the boss. |
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正： 
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉； 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Mr. 
Manager,
I’m writing to express my thank to you and your employee ________
Miss Li Hong who helped me found my handbag while I ________
was shopping in your shop in March 24． 
________
That day I was greatly interesting and lost myself in enjoying ________
a beautiful product. After I paid a pair of silk socks, I ________
left my handbag on the counter. I have already walked out of ________
the shop then Miss Li came up with my handbag. I thanked ________
her and offered her a reward of 20 dollars and she refused to ________
take even a cent. I deeply moved by her spirit. Miss Li’s ________
good qualities are something I’ll always keep on in mind.________
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Recently I've conducted a survey on if girls should 1.
lose weight among my classmate. Most of the students hold the 2.
view that girls should lose weight. In their opinion, girls are slim 3.
are more beautiful and attractively, and they are more confident in 4.
their study and work than those who are fat. Therefore, a few of the 5.
students have a different opinion. We think it’s a waste of time 6.
and money. In addition, lose weight may be harmful to their 7.
body and mind. After all, anything is more important than 8.
the health. If girls take weight-loss pills and then stop doing that 9.
some day, they will become fatter. So it is no need for young girls 10.
to lose weight as long as they are healthy.
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分
When most people thought of precious things, they 1_________
refer to money or jewelry. But I have everything very 2__________
preciously in my room. It’s not an Mp3 player or a cell phone. 3________
It’s the view from my window. I’m lucky live near a park. 4________
My window face the tops of the trees in the park. And below 5.________
the trees I can see children playing on the playground, 6_______
young couples walk quietly, and old people sitting 7._______
in the benches. The whole world is before my eyes. Most of 8 _______
my classmates like to go online, but when I have a free 9._______
time, I just sit in my chair but enjoy the most precious 10._______
thing in my room: the view.
短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world.
Everyone know we should keep the balance of nature, ____________
or we don’t always do as we say .____________
A species can become endangered with different reasons. . ____________
But the very important one is their living places are ruined. We ____________
cut down trees without plant new ones, and we pollute the place ____________
where animal live. Because of this, they have no home and ____________
they are going to be die out.____________
Other reason is money. Many tigers are killed by those ____________
who want to sell our fur and use their bones for medicine. ____________
We should do everything which can be done to change the ____________
situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.