My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Amy,
I glad to discuss your present situation with you. People often miss parents for the first time they left home. However, most people have to leave home for higher educations or employment. You cannot live with our parents forever. You should realize that the separation will help improve your person ability. You need to make new friends and share ideas with whomever has something in common with you. Maybe you will still miss your parents, and your new friends will bring joy to your new life. Also I suggest you will enjoy yourself by taking the active part in different activities. You will get much pleasure.
Faithfully yours
Sharon
下列文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When Jack bowed to someone，he always did much too quickly. You needn’t wait any longer after he finished nod his head. So he was blamed for no manner. One day a warmhearted man has taught him，“When you bow to somebody next time，you can count January，February，March，until December. Then you could lift your body up. Thus the ceremony will be very perfect.”
The next day，he met his uncle. He did as the men told .The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape away soon with a surprising look. When Jack looked down，he found his uncle gone. So he asked the passers-by，“In what month did he go away？
单句改错。以下句子中共有10处错误，每个句子错误数已给出，请改正。（每处1分，共10分） Traditional moon cakes are usually made by bean paste, but nowadays, there are many different kinds of moon cakes included fruit, coffee, chocolate.(2)
There is a special food for the Dragon Boat Festival, it is called zongzi, what is sticky rice in fresh bamboo leafs. (3)
In one story, lanterns were lighted to celebrate the power of light above darkness. (2)
I sat at the table in front of fire write a letter to Father Christmas told him about all the presents we wanted.(2)
Over 2000 years ago, people were known as the Celts lived in Northern Europe. (1)
I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in
my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li
Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the
summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I
was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father
has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much,
but we’ve kept writing to each other.
假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该添加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to another, look for the clothes we would wear in the contest．While the rest of us was enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting．Finally she found the suitable clothes．Deeply moving by what she did, we tried our best but won the first prize in the contest．Li Yue is always cares about the class．She often devotes her spare time in helping others．She has set good example to us．Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from him．