假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第1l处起)不计分。
I’m very grateful to my English teacher．In the past，my biggest shortcoming used to being carelessness，that worried me a lot．To make matters worse，I was so anxious to seek the fundamental reason in my failure．I just devoted me to huge amounts of practice，not paying attention to repeated mistakes．Fortunately，my teacher noticed it and offers to have a long talk with me．She gave me lots of advices on how to get rid of it．After I was persuading to change my attitude，I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessness and gained confidence as well as.It was the support she had given me made me what I’m today·
第II卷(共35分)
第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Brown,
Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very excited. We usually work only five hours a day , so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interest in it, reply to me soon. .
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little
dog. There are not many children of her age there we live, 76．__________
and we thought a dog would make her less alone. We were 77．__________
right. They play together happily all days. Our daughter now 78．__________
smiles and laughs a lot more than she used. In a way it 79．__________
is like having two children in the house. All of them are 80．__________
very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81．__________
want. The dog is easy to look after than my daughter. 82．__________
He always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83．__________
dirty clothes to wash. My wife is also happy because of 84．__________
I have given up smoke. The dog doesn’t like the smell. 85．__________
第II卷 (共35分)
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
I took part in a geography research study group in last term. Our 76 _
_______
topic was environmental pollution and protection. We took a variety 77 ________
of pictures showed the present pollution conditions of our city. To 78 ________
our surprised, there are still a lot of people doing silly things to our 79 ________
surroundings. Some people throw the rubbish anywhere they like, 80 ________
some cars give off harmful gases, and waste water is poured in 81 ________
rivers by some factories. Worse still, people sometimes had to make 82 ________
their ways through dusty winds as a result of pollution. Through 83 ________
our research, we come to know what everybody must pay attention 84 ________
to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect. 85 ________
第Ⅱ卷
第四部分：写作（共两节。满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横筑上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Some Americans judge success on the length 76．___________
of his vacations . The man who gets a month’s 77．___________
vacation each year consider himself more successful 78．___________
than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79．___________
to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80. ___________
get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81．___________
teachers who teach the three classes consider 82．___________
themselves less successful than that who teach 83．___________
only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84．___________
work Americans do , the less successful they 85．___________
consider themselves .
四改错
This summer holiday, I get a chance to teach English 76. ___________
beginners. I experienced life as teacher for the first time. 77. ___________
The students were very small, but I was even nervous when 78. ___________
so many kids stared at me. Fortunately, their warmly welcome 79. ___________
encouraged me. I taught them some letters, sang English songs 80. ___________
and played games with them, fill the classroom with laughter. 81. ___________
But little kid like talking with each other in class, so it was 82. ___________
hard to control the class. As a result, I got a sore throat. Thus, 83. ___________
I found that teaching is cool and exciting, especially that 84. ___________
when you help your students to learn anything with joy. 85. ___________