假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(—)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My brother, he would do some paperwork in a company, went to a remote village to participate the voluntary activity last month. So my mother was worried about that he could adjust himself to living there. She was dying to hearing from him. Later he told my mother he had fitted in well with the villagers there. However, he told them that a terrible accident had happened. The other day he, who was scared to dead, was about to attend a party while he witnessed it. Worse still, the car fled from the scene. Firstly he called, urged the doctors to rush to the spot and then he gave first aid to the injured. Eventually the injured man was lucky helped out of danger.
I am proud of him, who is occupying himself with his work and devotes himself to helping those in the need.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school , I had an awful experience . At that time I was so
brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all
kinds of bad things to me . I was scaring to see him.
So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to
dine out . I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well.
By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me . Now we
have become close friends.
In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we have the
courage to correct them.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school． I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel
like prisoner． I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet． The only thing I have to do it is studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply． There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost． I need your help．
Best wishes，
Li Ping
文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members of “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Think it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it on rice and water. The lucky bird recovered soon. When it was time for the bird to fly away, they felt pity but were very delightful. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to see film after supper. On my way to the cinema, I met an old Englishwoman,
she had lost her way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards her and
took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her great change had been taken place in the past few years and she told me something about Britain and her family. Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also practise my spoken English. If I hadn’t worked hard at English, I would have been able to help her
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Jim is one of my closely friends. Two months ago，his mother bought a computer
to him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard with the help of the
computer. To his surprise，Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every
day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact，a computer can do a lot of
everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories，hospitals，banks and so on. Many
computers scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my
opinion，the key is what we should use it wisely.