短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。
短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Abbly,
How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty students take exams for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that I will feel lonely. They can’t imagine a girl so young living alone. They advise me to studying in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with him. How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up?
Best wishes,
Jane
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. One of them was that they can earn money. In the most part，students working to earn money for their own use. Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as if they please. They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money. Some students may also to save up for our college or future use.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
My brother, who is a Harvard graduate, work in a multinational company. Recently, the company had failed several times in its attempts to break into the Chinese market. As a new manager in the charge of the sale department, he is trying every possible mean to promote their products. Because he has taken some effective measures, their profits are expected to rise at 30%. I am real proud of my brother. What’s more, he has promised to give me five thousand yuan until my summer holidays come. If not, I will be able to afford go travelling. How a wonderful piece of news!
下列短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用划线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1、每句不超过两个错误；
2、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My parents have done a lot to me, and I think it is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks.
此题要求改正所给单句中的错误。对标有题号的每一句做出判断：如有错误（每句只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该句右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该句右边的横线上写出该加的词。
此句错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该句右边横线上写出改正后的词。Everyone of us is working hard in the factory. _________________
I have caught a bad cold for a week and I can’t get rid of it. _________________
This is the steel plant where we visited last week. ________________
Following the road and you will find the store. __________________
This is all what Dr. Smith said at the meeting. __________________
He promised to come and see us after the supper. _________________
John came here to see you, but he had left five minutes ago. __________________
My mother is busy preparing for supper. __________________
I’ve heard him but I never know him. __________________
We got on the school bus and which took us straight to the People’s Park. ______
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s diseases. She lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration she showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy in her choosing career, traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles. She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How great she was!