假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错
误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn't move. The young man didn't know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found
a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my
best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked
after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother
came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with
each other, the world will become more beautiful.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出增加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
One day, while my friend and I was traveling through Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little money. We decided to stop at a village market to buy something to eat. We choose
the cheapest biscuits and ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great.“Let’s gets some more,” I said, “They’re cheap and they really taste well.” My friend could read some Germans, but I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name. She looked it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?” I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!” She said.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965.When I was a child, I dreamed flying in the sky.I joined the army in June, 1983.In 1992, I was sent to the air force base.In August, 1996, I become one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilot through the physical examination.I worked hardly, so I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998.
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I was choosed as one of the first man space aircraft astronautslater.In Oct.15, 2003, I successful flew to space, circled around the earth about 14 circles and then returned.I was honored to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space.
下文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in 18th century, people thought they were harmful.So a king of Sweden decided to find out whether thiswas true and not. It happened that there were twobrothers who were in the prison at the time. The king orderedone of them drink tea every day and the other coffee.Both of him lived many years without any problem.At last the one who had drink tea every day died atthe age of 83 and the other one lived even long. Because ofthis today Sweden is one of the country where many teaand coffee are drunk.
短文改错(满分10分)
Yesterday, I went to have lunch in a restaurant. The restaurant was such crowded that the food arrived late and the fish was cold. I was on a hurry, so I started eating the food anyway. Several minute later, a server came to me and was asked how I liked the meal. In that situation, he may choose to say honestly that you are disappointing that the food came out cold. However, I choose not to tell the truth. With a smile on my face, I told the server nothing satisfied me. I told lie. But it made the server happily.